RaphLuna 307 March 9, 2018 Share March 9, 2018 (edited) Uhh ijjhi ijjiji nnkijjiinin nni Edited May 15, 2018 by RaphLuna "Life is like a Roller Coaster, You never know what to expect" RaphLuna. http://raphluna.deviantart.com/ Here is where you can view more of my art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaphLuna 307 March 9, 2018 Author Share March 9, 2018 (edited) On 3/9/2018 at 3:44 PM, Califorum said: It's very interesting, though I would suggest doing something more 'different' maybe. Darkness as evil is done a little too much, but it's still cool nevertheless. Edited May 15, 2018 by RaphLuna "Life is like a Roller Coaster, You never know what to expect" RaphLuna. http://raphluna.deviantart.com/ Here is where you can view more of my art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaphLuna 307 March 9, 2018 Author Share March 9, 2018 1 minute ago, Califorum said: lol But how did he become this, and why? Well that too would need a background story as well. Thank you for the heads up.. Got to work on it more, wait ideal... ***Poof.*** "Life is like a Roller Coaster, You never know what to expect" RaphLuna. http://raphluna.deviantart.com/ Here is where you can view more of my art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goat-kun 2,530 March 9, 2018 Share March 9, 2018 A villain?! I'll go only 20% Ramsay Its power is too one-dimensional, or do you have a way to counter it. Then again, this is FIM where all the powers are one-dimensional. Anyhow, I gather that this is more of a serial killer type villain that is unaffiliated with known factions. I'm not convinced about the shadow and glowing eyes. Too similar to Umbrum. And the attack happens way too fast to be eerie. It's more like a crocodile jumping out of the water to chomp someone's head off. Maybe if the haunting happened over a period of time with increased intensity. And definitely change the name. I don't mind such descriptive names in horror but it's good to have another one prepared for the big reveal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaphLuna 307 March 9, 2018 Author Share March 9, 2018 10 minutes ago, Goat-kun said: A villain?! I'll go only 20% Ramsay Its power is too one-dimensional, or do you have a way to counter it. Then again, this is FIM where all the powers are one-dimensional. Anyhow, I gather that this is more of a serial killer type villain that is unaffiliated with known factions. I'm not convinced about the shadow and glowing eyes. Too similar to Umbrum. And the attack happens way too fast to be eerie. It's more like a crocodile jumping out of the water to chomp someone's head off. Maybe if the haunting happened over a period of time with increased intensity. And definitely change the name. I don't mind such descriptive names in horror but it's good to have another one prepared for the big reveal. Ohhhh I like the way you think , more like stalking its prey and once the prey is engulfed in fear, it appears using it its lure to enforce a fear that freezes the victims in its tracks. And then he absorbs the victims bodies... left with only a light orb of the victims soul, that tries to get away, yet with his dark shadow shape forming abilities, snatched the soul and completes devouring the victim whole... "Life is like a Roller Coaster, You never know what to expect" RaphLuna. http://raphluna.deviantart.com/ Here is where you can view more of my art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDP40F amtrak 2,447 March 9, 2018 Share March 9, 2018 Woah that one wired villain How do you defeat him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaphLuna 307 March 10, 2018 Author Share March 10, 2018 (edited) UUhg jnjj jnjkij nknij njn Edited May 15, 2018 by RaphLuna 1 "Life is like a Roller Coaster, You never know what to expect" RaphLuna. http://raphluna.deviantart.com/ Here is where you can view more of my art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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