mlp story help

[sherri 108]

i'm looking for someone to give my story a read.....

 

the confrontion of daylight glitter  *daylight glitter is my oc*

 

although, there's a few parts i'm not sure how to fill it'd be great if someone give me a hand with that

 

 

i thought hard on this, even though it's my first mlp story/fanfic 

Edited May 9, 2018 by Snow Walnut

[Wonderbolt Slipstream 264]

  On 2018-05-09 at 4:20 PM, Snow Walnut said:

i'm looking for someone to give my story a read.....

 

the confrontion of daylight glitter  *daylight glitter is my oc*

 

although, there's a few parts i'm not sure how to fill   i thought hard on this, even though it's my first mlp story/fanfic 

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I'm willing to read it and give it an honest review later today

[sherri 108]

  On 2018-05-09 at 4:27 PM, Slipstream95 said:

I'm willing to read it and give it an honest review later today

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that'd be great   thanks

[Wonderbolt Slipstream 264]

  On 2018-05-09 at 4:31 PM, Snow Walnut said:

that'd be great   thanks

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Of course, it's no problem

[sherri 108]

  On 2018-05-09 at 5:44 PM, Wonderbolt Slipstream said:

Of course, it's no problem

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just wondering...

 

did you take a read at my in-complete mlp fanfic yet? the confrontion of daylight glitter