shirofluff 17 July 22, 2020 Share July 22, 2020 Um hi! i made this comic and i want it to be seen by others in the community. its the first page of my comic featuring my characters. idk if its allowed here but i thought i might try, thank you! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astral Vision 286 July 22, 2020 Share July 22, 2020 @shirofluff I think your comic has a good beginning, though it's hard to tell if he's yelling in the second panel besides the exclamation marks and bubble shape. The lettering could be a little bigger, and his eye pupils could be a bit more dilated to create a frustrated expression. Other than that, and also the need for *yay* sensors, your comic is off to a good start. Keep up the hard work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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