shirofluff

fallout equestria fan comic

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Um hi! i made this comic and i want it to be seen by others in the community. its the first page of my comic featuring my characters. idk if its allowed here but i thought i might try, thank you!

fallout_equestria_seeds_of_hope__pg_1_by

  • Brohoof 2
  • Smile 1

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Looking good, but I would advice on using multiple bubbles instead of huge wall of texts and small font.

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@shirofluff

I think your comic has a good beginning, though it's hard to tell if he's yelling in the second panel besides the exclamation marks and bubble shape. The lettering could be a little bigger, and his eye pupils could be a bit more dilated to create a frustrated expression.

Other than that, and also the need for :yay: *yay* sensors, your comic is off to a good start. Keep up the hard work. :)

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