Ongoing comic

[twilightlicious69 629]

I'll Shine has 10 pages now, so I should probably show the whole of Poniverse what the comic is.

It takes place in the town of Ashvanagar (the town is not canon, FYI), which is led by a family of alicorns. The story is centred on Rainbowshine, who is an ordinary pegasus in their alicorn family. Rainbowshine doesn't get the love of her parents because she's not born an alicorn. However, she knows that shining in a certain field has turned Twilight and Cadence into alicorns. So she tries to look for a field to shine in, and get her parents' love.

 

Page 1:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-1-913521957

Page 2:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-2-913615328

Page 3:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-3-913727022

Page 4:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-4-914762842

Page 5:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-5-915050343

Page 6:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-6-915348935

Page 7:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-7-915465717

Page 8:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-8-915662156

Page 9:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-9-916051918

Page 10:

https://www.deviantart.com/rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-10-916517032

I'd love to hear what y'all think!

 

[ExplosionMare 22,139]

I really like Rainbowshine's glasses  

[twilightlicious69 629]

Page 11!

https://www.deviantart.com/itz-rainbowshine295/art/I-ll-Shine-Page-11-916986494