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Jesse20

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basiclly ive been having these dreams and ive written them down and they all go in order heres what happens "so im walking to my freind's house for a party that he texted me about 2 weeks ago so im walking there and i see this white spot in the ground infront of his house i go over to see what it is and i fall in and im falling faster and faster thinking this is the end of my life then i see that im falling towards a forrest as im about to hit these trees i notice the trees have razor sharp leaves on them when i fall on the first tree three leaves hit my throat leaving 3 cuts on my throat now im unable to make any sound i hit the next tree and 4 leaves slice my forhead leaving more huge cuts but before i hit the finnal tree i see some sort of blue winged animal with what appears to be a rainbow colored mane then i black out"

 

if you want more tell me so ive got 3 journals full of this story

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No offence, but I do hope your fan fiction is better written than that description. Assuming it is, I would be very much interested in reading it.


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No offence, but I do hope your fan fiction is better written than that description. Assuming it is, I would be very much interested in reading it.

 

ihave it written in a total of 3 journals but descripitions is like reading those big cardboard books you read to 2year olds but i will revise it before i post the story but sorry if it wasnt very good this is going to be my first fanfic. also this fanfic was made just by recording what happend in my dreams
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ihave it written in a total of 3 journals but descripitions is like reading those big cardboard books you read to 2year olds but i will revise it before i post the story but sorry if it wasnt very good this is going to be my first fanfic. also this fanfic was made just by recording what happend in my dreams

 

Fantastic. Dreams are a great motivator for creative writing. Good luck in your writing, and be sure to post it when finished!

"Hater's hate did create, that which they all feared. It is they we have to thank, for it is us they engineered."~ Me
"Eventually!"~ Also Me

"Critics who treat 'adult' as a term of approval, instead of as a merely descriptive term, cannot be adult themselves. To be concerned about being 'grown up', to admire the 'grown up' because it is 'grown up', to blush at the suspicion of being childish; These are the marks of childhood and adolescence. When I became a man, I put away childish things, including the fear of childishness and the desire to be 'Very Grown Up'."~ C.S. Lewis

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Fantastic. Dreams are a great motivator for creative writing. Good luck in your writing, and be sure to post it when finished!

 

you could say it was a motivator but really i just wrote down what happend in my dream
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you could say it was a motivator but really i just wrote down what happend in my dream

 

In that case, is it just going to be a dream journal, or will you actually edit it into story form?

"Hater's hate did create, that which they all feared. It is they we have to thank, for it is us they engineered."~ Me
"Eventually!"~ Also Me

"Critics who treat 'adult' as a term of approval, instead of as a merely descriptive term, cannot be adult themselves. To be concerned about being 'grown up', to admire the 'grown up' because it is 'grown up', to blush at the suspicion of being childish; These are the marks of childhood and adolescence. When I became a man, I put away childish things, including the fear of childishness and the desire to be 'Very Grown Up'."~ C.S. Lewis

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In that case, is it just going to be a dream journal, or will you actually edit it into story form?

 

whatever you call it its about a boy(me) overcoming the fact that hes not crazy and he lives in a world filled with unicorns and pegisi
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Not to be mean but i have never been terribly interested in the thought of a brony going to Equestria. However maybe you could keep me up to speed as you put out chapters, I'd love to see someone change my mind.

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Not to be mean but i have never been terribly interested in the thought of a brony going to Equestria. However maybe you could keep me up to speed as you put out chapters, I'd love to see someone change my mind.

 

in this story its from my dreams and i pretty much know nothing about eqestria or that the ponies talk so its not another "brony goes to equestria"
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in this story its from my dreams and i pretty much know nothing about eqestria or that the ponies talk so its not another "brony goes to equestria"

 

Fair, again, keep me up to date on this. I wanna at least check it out.

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Fair, again, keep me up to date on this. I wanna at least check it out.

 

if i find a website where i can upload fan fics ill put the link in this topic
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