A lil rhyme i thought of

[Rainbow-Crash 101]

so this is just a little rhyme that popped in my head after listening to some inspirational music. idk if its good or not but i really like making it and singing it. its just about how im not comfortable at my own home and how i rather leave for days. me taking stress out from family and peers through urban arts and that ponies and the community made me realize that if i love something then who cares about what others think and dont neglect somethings because others do. hope it doesnt sound stupid

 

if you want, i much much rather you read the lyrics to this instrumental

instead of the lyrics by themselves

beat hits at 23 seconds

and like most rap songs 4 beats per line

 

Lyrics:

 

Feeling so dizzy head spin fall back on the ground

Keep down head low no safe and sound

Don’t feel like getting out of bed sometimes

Why do I even bother keeping on track at school

Don’t pay attention i rather sketch out this rhyme

Life seems rather pointless at times

At home I walk staring at my shoes

Don’t look up no contact no feelings are bruised

Paint art that’s crazy, shine like a light

No blank walls for miles stack cans like piles

I feel like im in trouble, gonna get caught for the paint

People don’t know act normal try being a saint

But I cant stay home, my shoulders are heavy

Back pack full of clothes, and a laptop

Got mlp fans help me up this steep hill

Let my heart rest, let my feet chill

They give me happiness I sometimes lack

Help me shake brony haters of my back

Keep it close don’t let go if this is how you feel

Believe in your passion don’t fall into a social fashion

Watch life go by with my headphones in

Act like I have no feelings……

but mine got hurt……..

fuck that, its time to assert!

 

Tell me what you thought guys

Edited July 10, 2012 by Rainbow-Crash

[Twilight Sky 449]

For some reason when I read the lyrics in my head it came out as eminem rapping it...

 

The song you put with it though doesn't go as good as it could even with everything in beat...there should be some really slow piano music instead...

Edited July 10, 2012 by Valiant

[Rainbow-Crash 101]

For some reason when I read the lyrics in my head it came out as eminem rapping it...

 

The song you put with it though doesn't go as good as it could even with everything in beat...there should be some really slow piano music instead...

 

yer i might search for a piano beat, Thanks for the feed back

 

For some reason when I read the lyrics in my head it came out as eminem rapping it...

 

The song you put with it though doesn't go as good as it could even with everything in beat...there should be some really slow piano music instead...

 

 

 

do you think it could go better with this?

Edited July 11, 2012 by Rainbow-Crash