ShadowBean 318 July 12, 2012 Share July 12, 2012 Uhmm... Well... This is my second drawing I've ever made on a tablet and I think ended up much better than my first one Except that the head is a little bit too big.... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406 July 12, 2012 Share July 12, 2012 I think the head is very nice on this. My main problem is with the wing. At portions of it, especially towards the right, it starts to get mis-shapen. That's something that needs to be improved. Another thing I'd like to point out is the thickness off the back legs. They seem rather lanky for her size. And with your art, you may want to experiment with different shading techniques. Sometimes, one solid color can be bland. Overall, though, your work isn't that bad. 1 I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL BUT IN THE END IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER /WRISTS On 4/28/2013 at 8:13 PM, gooM said: Djenty...man you are crazy, but an awesome sort of crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 12, 2012 Share July 12, 2012 My critique: What happened to her highlite in her hair? It should go throughout the entierity, not just the inner portion. Her eyes seem... dead. She has no pupils, so it is just a blank stare. Her underbelly is a little unproportional. Her wings are a little too small. Her tail is lovely, save the end. Comes to a point, which is not really wanted. You should have more of a spiky ending, it may be generic, but it looks fabulous. Her cutie mark is simple, yet efficeint. Her hooves aren't round and straight enough. Her only good hoof is her outer left one. The rest are misshapen. Nice drawing for a 2nd picture. 3/5 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowBean 318 July 12, 2012 Author Share July 12, 2012 I think the head is very nice on this. My main problem is with the wing. At portions of it, especially towards the right, it starts to get mis-shapen. That's something that needs to be improved. Another thing I'd like to point out is the thickness off the back legs. They seem rather lanky for her size. And with your art, you may want to experiment with different shading techniques. Sometimes, one solid color can be bland. Overall, though, your work isn't that bad. Thanks for the good critique it's very appreciated I'm still trying to learn all the tools in SAI 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowBean 318 July 12, 2012 Author Share July 12, 2012 (edited) My critique: What happened to her highlite in her hair? It should go throughout the entierity, not just the inner portion. Her eyes seem... dead. She has no pupils, so it is just a blank stare. Her underbelly is a little unproportional. Her wings are a little too small. Her tail is lovely, save the end. Comes to a point, which is not really wanted. You should have more of a spiky ending, it may be generic, but it looks fabulous. Her cutie mark is simple, yet efficeint. Her hooves aren't round and straight enough. Her only good hoof is her outer left one. The rest are misshapen. Nice drawing for a 2nd picture.3/5 I always get the outer left hoof right the other ones is just... bleh. The legs is something I'm tring to improve. And about the hair it's supposed to be like that. Thanks for the good critique, you always point out the errors I can't see Edited July 12, 2012 by ShadowBean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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