It's been far too long, my friends...

[Smokescape 58]

I made a snazzy little song for the first time in awhile. Hope you guys like it. It's cool if you don't though haha. As always, feedback is more than welcome. Except for EQ'ing, I forgot to do that >.>

[Cadence Sparkle 102]

Before I dissect this melody I have to say, simply that I like it AND that wonderful cover art too. But I have to critic you, it's my instinct.

 

The pros are very apparent even at the beginning, it has a VERY soothing and relaxing tone with this slight electronic mix in the background, eventually getting louder around 0:30-0:40. I was very surprised when out of nowhere Trixe talked!! After that I thought you were going to drop the bass and pull out Dj-Pwn3. But, surprisingly you managed to keep the same style but make it faster and more intense. Then you continues the fast pace and s-l-o-w-e-d it down to the "normal" pace and ended with MORE TRIXIE!

 

The first con I heard was that a lot of the same beats played over and over between 0:30-1:00 while you DID change it slightly that made it better, if you ever decide (or forget) to change it slightly the song will get more grange band like. (same loops OVER AND OVER)

 

overall though, it's an ok song. It has the potential to be better with more practice (and so do you) so keep at it and one day you'll be as good as TheLivingToumbstone!

 

Hope you liked my critique - TheFlowerPoison (.aka. Cadence Sparkle)

[Smokescape 58]

Before I dissect this melody I have to say, simply that I like it AND that wonderful cover art too. But I have to critic you, it's my instinct.

 

The pros are very apparent even at the beginning, it has a VERY soothing and relaxing tone with this slight electronic mix in the background, eventually getting louder around 0:30-0:40. I was very surprised when out of nowhere Trixe talked!! After that I thought you were going to drop the bass and pull out Dj-Pwn3. But, surprisingly you managed to keep the same style but make it faster and more intense. Then you continues the fast pace and s-l-o-w-e-d it down to the "normal" pace and ended with MORE TRIXIE!

 

The first con I heard was that a lot of the same beats played over and over between 0:30-1:00 while you DID change it slightly that made it better, if you ever decide (or forget) to change it slightly the song will get more grange band like. (same loops OVER AND OVER)

 

overall though, it's an ok song. It has the potential to be better with more practice (and so do you) so keep at it and one day you'll be as good as TheLivingToumbstone!

 

Hope you liked my critique - TheFlowerPoison (.aka. Cadence Sparkle)

 

I highly appreciate this! Any form form of critique is helpful to me. It helps me understand what I did right and what I did wrong. SO thank you!