My Fanfic, Crystal Horned Alicorn

[Ethan Pow 333]

Well I have been writing this story for about 2 weeks and I already gotten to 11 chapters done and over 50,000 words. I hardly ever write as this been a great drive for me to get into eversince I started.

 

Summary of the story:

 

Across a mishap form leaving a realm when it was closing form its own self destruction. Ethan Comes in contact with another realm, the realm of my little pony friendship is magic. finding out that he is a copy of himself since the realm laws force him to be split and changed to a alicorn, he becomes apart of Equestria to begin a life as a pony, and hopes he doesn't mess things up.

 

My Goal of the story:

 

Keeping the characters as they are in the story like they are in the show. I keep watching espoides or checking the wiki if I am unsure I am not retaining the characters personalty, Correct Spelling or terms used in the story. I do go on dates with some of the mane 6 but some I don't for a few reasons that I can tell.

 

After that I am trying to reach 1,000,000 words in this story before I consider completing it. Allows me to keep on rolling on it. I might take a few days before I place a new chapter unless I am working again.

 

I try and keep each chapter above 3,500 words, Its a goal I do. The 10th chapter is about 10,000 words itself.

 

I try and keep it active(I hate making people wait too long for another chapter), If I get to milestones I make bonus chapters (IE 10,000 views, 100 favorates, 100 follows etc.)that I release on my deviantart account which I also where I will draw or get commissions of the OCs or locations of my story.

 

Warning to the reader:

 

I am not really great with grammer and spelling, sometimes I write so fast I completely miss the errors I make. If you do find errors and It really needs to be fixed, let me know and I will fix it quickly. I do try to reread the story but something sometimes gets though my hooves.

 

Something to Note:

 

Helpful Reviews to show me if I am doing something odd and being clear of those errors helps me. If I am doing good or suggest something I should do in another chapter helps me see if I can expand on the story. Just telling me my story sucks without reasoning doesn't help me or prove that its correct, in which, I completely ignore those messages.

 

I avoid making any chapter sad unless its needed, This has happened once I believe in one chapter.

 

Clickly ze Linkie:

[link] - To the story its hosted on Fanfiction.net

[link] - To the story, hosted on FIMfiction.net

[link] - bonus chapter I placed on my deviantart account I did for reaching 1,000 views on my story.

 

Chapters in the story and their Summary.

 

 

1) Dropped out of the sky: Ethan Pow(Delta) crash land in Equestria and in a unlikely turn of events Twilight was there as well. Getting introducted with the Monarch of Equestira he takes time to review what just happened and why he is a pony.

 

2) Long Live The New Prince: Being recovered from yesterday the main character becomes a Prince of Equestria because he is a Alicorn. He goes and plans to move to ponyville.

 

3) Princes Cup of Tea: Getting his hooves into the ideals of Equestria. Some timberwolves attack fluttershy's house and its time to clean them out.

 

4) The Prince and The Guards: The Prince is assigned a small group of guards and finally his home is finished. It comes a slight chore to manage.

 

5) Teaching the Basics, Prince: Rainbow Dash and Twilight become Teachers to help the New Prince how to use his abilities.

 

6) The Joke is on the Prince: The Prince and few of the mane 6 head into Everfree forest meeting Zecora, Comes across the Poison Joke and is effected by it.

 

7) Canterlot Royal visit: Twilight, The Prince and Spike head to Canterlot to see the princesses and how the Prince is learning. Luna makes a very funny face.

 

8) NightDerp Night: When the Prince heads into the Everfree forest to get his costume ready for Nightmare Night, Derpy stopped him from making a mistake and becomes friends with the prince.

 

9) Prince's Exodus: A royal pain of the original's hoof, Exodus takes control of a long in sleep alicorn in stasis and Delta has to even the score to keep Equestira safe.

 

10) Coronation: The Gala is here and the Prince will be Offically crowned, he is very Nevous though of the whole thing. Having his first encounter with the royal council as a moderator.

 

11) Dangerous Waters: Water is disappearing in one of the states of Equestria, The Prince is requested to join in helping the problem as he was just getting another issue solved.

 

12) Nature Calls: Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and the Prince head out to see this land that been unocciped for sometime as ages ago animals have forced ponies from living there as it was only good solution to get land for the prince.

 

13) Transfer of Power: Twilight is working on a spell and something happens, changes Twilight and the Prince, they try to figure out how to fix this.

 

14) Dragon's Keep: a dragoness uses the nearly finished castle as a nest. What will the Prince do now?

 

15) Equivalent Exchange: A new antagonist appears... and the Prince will be challenged on a new level.

 

Edited August 30, 2012 by Ethan Pow

[Tank Legend 20]

It's really good i love it. I read every chapter right once it comes out. Its much better than other MLP FiM Fan fictions I've read.

[Ethan Pow 333]

It's really good i love it. I read every chapter right once it comes out. Its much better than other MLP FiM Fan fictions I've read.

 

yay, I am working on chapter 14 right now , I hope that its as good as the rest or better *big grin*

 

Chapter 14 is done now, I hope its good to everyone I seem to get better with writing now woo...

[Tank Legend 20]

Swweet I'll read it later i'm plattoning with dragon right now so. yes/

[Ethan Pow 333]

Got a FIMfiction account, I hope more bronies enjoy my story as much as lego has or give me more detailed feedback on where it needs improvement.

 

EDIT: Ya, I got trolls on there that hate just the smallest little thing... I hate to outright delete their messages and demand if they are going to comment... they better have a dam good reason to bash it if they do so.

 

Also I hate FIMfiction (F5Fiction as the joke goes)

 

I just did a large grammar raid on the first 6 chapters on my story on FANFICITION.NET and I hope its more 'readable' now

 

chapter 15 equivalent exchange has been uploaded to fanfction.net titled equivalent exchange go ahead and look at it and see if its awesome to ya... if not... I tried.

Edited August 30, 2012 by Ethan Pow