Preparing Nightmare Night

[Tdroid 234]

I came across a user on DeviantART who in my humble opinion had some great pieces of art. I sent her a note and asked if I could base some of my drawings of her works in the pursuit of improving myself and she was kind enough to say she didn't mind.

So here is my firsts(and rather poor) attempt on Preparing NIghtmare Night.

 

If you think I could do something specific better please let me know, it is the best way I can better myself.

 

Her DeviantART. I recomend you take a look, there are some really nice ones there.

 

Original version of Preparing NIghtmare NIght.

 

DeviantART for my version of it.

 

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[Planty 1,053]

Hey that's not to bad, it's no way near as clean or neat as the original piece, but it defiantly looks cool

 

Personally I think that the colouring and shading could be done better which would give it a cleaner finish

 

Some things also feel just slightly out of proportion, like nightmare mon in the free and elements of zecora's face just seem a bit off to me .

 

In any case , keep up the good work you'll get better all the time !

[Felix 1,363]

Personally I think it's just shading that's appears as the main issue. Other than that on the more positive side Zekora came out quite nicely!

[---Princess Cadance--- 1]

i think its realy cool, but the shading is an isue infotunaly but zecora came out realy good, keep up the good work