The Kingdom of Discord

[The Pirate Prince 105]

Hello, I've written the first chapter of my first long length fan-fiction.

 

http://www.fimfictio...ce-in-Equestria

 

Set ten years after the founding of Equestria, my fan-fic will explore Discord's rise to power and him being overthown by the princesses.

 

The first chapter is mainly just background information about what happened in the ten years, how the ponies came together and became one society.

 

Please, please, please give feedback.

 

Chapter two is up. I'm happy with it, but please give feed back and I'll try fixing anything that's wrong.

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/52121/2/The-Kingdom-of-Discord/Chapter-Two%3A-Canterlot%27s-Tenth-Anniversary

 

Still no Discord high jinx yet, next chapter I promise. I reintroduce the main characters from Hearth's Warming Eve that'll take part in this story, as well as introduce the new Pegasi Commander. I don't know if my choice of his name will be well received, but believe me, I have a plan to try do it justice.

 

I'm going to bed now, I have a headache. See you all later. Please give feed back.

 

Chapter four is up, mainly dialog. Please have a read.

 

I didn't update when I did chapter three, so consider this that as well.

 

Please rate, share, comment ect.

Edited September 19, 2012 by The Pirate Prince