Drawing for Halloween (. 3 .)

[Snow Drift 39]

Okay, so I drew my OC, Breezerunner, transformed as a zombie for the halloween's. Only problem is I need more people's opinion on it. I sound stupid, but I feel like it kinda sucks. o~o; Just don't say one word and that's it, please.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Looking good for a start. Lets see *cracks knuckles*

Right wing is a bit short, if meant to be damaged maybe add blood and/or a bone sticking out

-saliva should run out of the corners of his mouth, not the whole width

-The ounds on the leg should "curve in" to signify that flesh is missing.

-the hindleg anatomy needs some looking at, frontlegs are a bit too close together.

[Snow Drift 39]

Looking good for a start. Lets see *cracks knuckles*

Right wing is a bit short, if meant to be damaged maybe add blood and/or a bone sticking out

-saliva should run out of the corners of his mouth, not the whole width

-The ounds on the leg should "curve in" to signify that flesh is missing.

-the hindleg anatomy needs some looking at, frontlegs are a bit too close together.

 

Ok, that actually makes me notice those errors now. XD But thank you for poiting them out to me, I'll try to make it. (^ 3 ^)~ sldfhgaeth