Ruins of Harmony (Original)

[Radiarc 10]

I made a song for the place where Twilight and the others first receive the Elements of Harmony.

 

 

I wanted to make it feel like a place in the Everfree forest, so it's not exactly happy, nor is it sad, but it's sort of in between.

Reminds me a little bit of Torvus Bog from Metroid Prime 2.

 

Anyways, uhh, I hope you all enjoy it.

I'll have a download link soon.

 

Also, should I go ahead and post the other songs I've made?

And, if so, where should I post them (I only have 4 that I want to post, if everypony is okay with that)?

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

As this is a very beautiful song it unfortunately gets boring in the end. It's too repetitive, in my opinion.

I'd suggest making a drumpattern and making it upbeat somewhere in the song, to make it more interesting.

[ShadowBean 318]

Nice work! Sounds really good

[cjr88 10]

This is very entertaining song and I like it. But, I think what this song needed to is slowly though out the song get darker. Then just as the song is getting to be sad perhaps frighting, it should fairly quickly rise to a climax of a hopeful rhythm, something that says the dawn has come. Then end it with something a little more light hearted than the song began but, obviously lower than the climax and more instruments would help.

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

This is very entertaining song and I like it. But, I think what this song needed to is slowly though out the song get darker. Then just as the song is getting to be sad perhaps frighting, it should fairly quickly rise to a climax of a hopeful rhythm, something that says the dawn has come. Then end it with something a little more light hearted than the song began but, obviously lower than the climax and more instruments would help.

 

This... this is exactly what I was trying to say ^^

[ZomBrony 347]

I haven't been listening for very long (0:57) and I like it, but if what everypony else is saying is true I'd certainly agree with cjr88

 

ok I see what they mean, I started getting bored around 3:50

[Account No Longer Exists 103]

Wow! I love it! What program did you use to compose it? Finale? Sebillus?

[Radiarc 10]

Wow! I love it! What program did you use to compose it? Finale? Sebillus?

 

I use LMMS.

[PeachPalette 1,000]

I love it! I have it on repeat currently!

[Twich 15]

This is very entertaining song and I like it. But, I think what this song needed to is slowly though out the song get darker. Then just as the song is getting to be sad perhaps frighting, it should fairly quickly rise to a climax of a hopeful rhythm, something that says the dawn has come. Then end it with something a little more light hearted than the song began but, obviously lower than the climax and more instruments would help.

 

I certainly agree with this, I like the song - but it should reach a climax in it somewhere, and then back down a little. I'm no musician myself, but I know what I like, and that alone should be enough if you ask me. Other than that I thoroughly enjoyed it

Also I wouldn't mind listening to the other things you've made - Other than the things mentioned, it's great, As I mentioned: I thoroughly enjoyed it