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Niylon thought he had seen Electro so he looked around because something didn't seem right to him. He began to use his magic to see if there was any kind of danger to hm.Then he got this from Luna,"What if Niylon finds out? what if i fail"? He began to think it was funny to say the less no pony has been able to fool him for this long. He went some were else and began to wait for night fall, he thought if every pony was asleep then his chances would be better.

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Electro Dash had been waiting in that bar for a long time. She knew niylon was still ou there, but couldn't give up here cover. she looked around the door, waited for him to turn his back, then dashed to the nearest building, and kept doing so, untill she was a safe distance away to fly off.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon looked up at the sky it was getting dark. Niylon went into a nearby building and undid the spell keeping him as a wonderful stallion. He knew what Electro was trying to do from what Luna's thoughts told him, Niylon let out an evil laugh mostly because he fond it funny it was like a game of chest to him and his opponents had all the there knights, pawns and lastly Queens. Niylon began to use his last of his magic to become like the shadows only thing that can be seen is his black souless eyes.

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Electro dash returned home. Obviously Niylon wouldn't be there, for he was to busy playing With luna. "If he wasnt trying to enslave us all, I would have gutted that little bitch myself" she mumbled. If tonight went as well as she hoped, then hopefully the guards will hold him down till celestia recovers, and then they can send him to hell, where he belongs.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon entered Lunas room unnoticed , he saw that Luna was asleep so he went to her bed side. It looked like to him that she was asleep but something didn't seem right as if it was set up by some pony. He began to look around the room in shadow form , but he notice something about luna that he didn't notice, she had a sun cutie mark. Niylon knew that this was a set up and began looking for the real Luna.


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Electro dash went up to bed Hopefully evrythings going fine she thought. But nothing goes fine. She had another dream when she slept, again of future celestia but she said something else "Your doing well, But your not done yet, He is still gainig controll and if you dont hurry he will win."


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon looked every were for Luna, finaly it hit him."Smart mare , she took Luna home with her". Niylon no longer able to play nice made his way to electro's home in full wrath. Meanwile Luna looked out Electro's basement thinking she was safe."Electro are you sure Niylon wouldn't come looking for me here"? Luna began to fear that Niylon will not be defeated and that she will fail.


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"well id say by now that he's found out you're not there. But its a good 10 mile trip from here to canterlot so unless he can teleport miles across, well be safe till morining. because i rigged the train to miss the stop at ponyville, ittle just go straight to nothern equestria!"


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon was in a full hurry his magic was failing him soon he'll be mortal which meant he'll have to head back to the underworld and regaine his strangth, which made him very angry if Electro wasn't with his foal he would kill her. He placed a thought in Lunas mind."Your sister is in danger go to suger cube corner." Luna ran out the door and headed to suger cube corner.


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Luna rushed up the stairs of the basement and out the door "Goddammit Luna Where in celestia's name are you going?" Luna replied "Im going to save my sister! she's at sugarcube corner!" Electro Dash didnt have time for this "Your sister is in canterlot for bucks sake!"


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Luna replied."Thats not what my thoughts told me". Niylon was waiting for Luna when his shadow spell failed him."Blasted my magic is gone"! Niylon had to hurry he had no time to romance Luna he was going to take her one way or another, he didn't care if he was in his ture form the fact that he stopped being nice showed he didn't care any more.

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"WELL YOUR THOUGHTS LIED!" Electro Felt this was a trap, she didnt care. And so instead of letting the princess get take, she Dashed passed, burst down the door and slid across the floor comeing to a halt. she turned around to see an abomination of a pony behind the door.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon spoke in his cold voice."Missed me my dear Electro"? Niylon kept his black souless eyes on her he recalled every lie that he ever told her. he didn't care if he wasn't her blonde mane stallion who never told a lie to her, it made him sick to know that he had a relationship with a Pegasus of all things instead of an Alicorn.

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" ah yes. If it isnt the racist abomination of a pony if I ever saw one.. you shouldve stayed in hell." Electro had a smile on her face, like she knew she was winning. "Now how about i tell you a little secret shall i? see luna over there? shes not luna." just as she says theese words, the fake luna unzips her skin to reveal a perfectly healed celestia. "you see, i never broke celestia's horn, that was a fake. and the real luna was back at canterlot all along. so lets see shall we? your magic is depleted, and your trapped with the only exit bieng vlocked by a near- god. lets seee you wriggle your way out now, you sick basterd."


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon eyes didn't move."I still win,you will give birth to my foal who in turn will date Luna when he gets older, you have been a wonderful pawn my dear Electro but your kind really doe's need to learn to submit to me". Niylon let out a wicked laugh he knew Electro wouldn't kill her own child just to save equestria.

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"But what if he doesn't? What if i give Birth and your not there? I can care for him, grow him up the right way and make him forget about who his father is. If i do things right, he may grow up as a regular pony, And if he's an alicorn then perhaps he could discover a new lland, and become leader of that."


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon came close to Electro." You can't change what going to become , he's going to date Luna then they'll have a foal and there's nothing you can do to change that you my dear Electro have failed ". Celestia shot a blot of magic at Niylon turning him into stone , she thens looks at Electro." Don't believe what he had said. The future isn't written in stone you alone can change that".


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Electro bowed down to the princess. " I hope it isn't. But what could i say? its not like im going to go "hey your dad was evil and you'r a mistake. And what if he's an alicorn? would he try to take the throne?" Elcectro had a lot of questions. but for now she went on to bed.

(OOC: is that it?)


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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(OOC: no the story doesn't end there yet) Niylon was placed in the Canterlot Gardens but something didn't feel right as if the statue was nothing more then a empty shell, Celestia didn't think about that because it was not possible for Niylon to Escape with no magic. But little did she know a little bit of Niylons soul went into Luna right before he was turned to stone.


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Electro Dash Decided to visit the Royals at canterlot. Something didn't feel right. She knew Niylon had been turned to stone but, it just felt like he hadn't. she walked through the canterlot Gardens and saw Niylons statue. "I hope you'r happy back in hell."


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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A voice answered back inside Electro's mind."You can't undo what as been already done". Luna as been up in her room for the day mostly because she was still in shock that Niylon as been in her room the other night, but still she hasn't been her cheerful self.


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Electro heard a voice in her head. It sounded like the statue was actually talking back. But that was impossible. He couldent still be alive right? Electro shook the tought off and began to climb the stairs up to luna's room and see if she was ok after yesterday.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Luna was looking out her window when she heard Electro come into her room. "O, hello Electro how have you been"? Luna didn't make any eye contact because she was still thinking about last night , she remembered if Celestia didn't pant over her cutie mark Niylon could of done something to her.


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"im doing fine thank you" She bowed her head. "I came over to just ask you something. what do you think'll happen with me and mym ya know, New child?" Electro had many more questions but she decided to stick with the one question for. She couldn't really see how luna could help though.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Luna sighed."Just love it like any other foal, but i got to ask you something Electro". Luna wanted to know something about her and Niylon when they were going out, but she wasn't to sure if she should ask that but something inside her told her to ask. She was still unsure about the question, She had to to know.


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