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This was confusing. First off, there was'nt any reason for a pricess mabye even a god to be here. And second, why would she attack such an innocent pony? Electro couldent tell if she wanted to take action, of just ask and reason.

"excuse me celstia, but why are you attacking my boyfriend?"


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Celestia didn't answer she kept on using her magic to hurt Niylon. Niylon called out again."Electro! help me please". Niylon kept acting like he really needed help. Niylon even implanted a thought into her head."Celestia is jealous of you she saw how happy you were with niylon and now she is going to kill him unless you do something to help Niylon".


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Electro remained calm. talking did'nt help, then time for plan B. She got the nearest foldable chair, and smashed it againts celestia's horn. apparently That was a big enough force to break her horn, and so The magic she had been using ha now faded away.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon then restrained Celestia till the guards arrived, Niylon wanted to smile but he knew that will blow his cover. Niylon looked at Electro and huged her like she just saved his life."I know that wasn't easy for you but thank you". Niylon hoped that this time she will be willing to go along with his final faze.


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"look it was... It was nothing. I done what needed to be donel." She looked at niylon with concern. " how did you get her to show up here anyway, and how come you don't appear hurt?" That was a troubling decision for her to make, and now she thought whether she would be arrested, or thanked.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon looked at her and he lied but he kept eye contact to make himself more believable."I called her after i heard about the uprisings i figured maybe she will claim down after she had some relaxation from her royal duties but after awhile she stated how alone she was and said that i should be with her instead of you but i refused to leave you that's when she attacked me". Niylon act like he was deeply hurt even to himself the lie sounded more believable.


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"Wow," Elsectro replied, "I never knew she could behave in such a way." Electro felt guilty for not helping sooner, or even for leaving to go to canterlot the day before. perhaps if she did stay behind, then none of this would have happened.

"it's late, i think you should be going to bed and get some rest." she said finally, giving him a kiss.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon kissed her back. "Is it alright if i stay with you just for tonight"? Niylon wanted to completely jump to the final faze but he knew she'll say no so he messed with her mind again."It's just for tonight what can possibly happen"? Niylon waited for her response hopefully she'll give away to her mind.


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Electro Dash sighed with relief "i was wondering when you'd say that," she said, "I'll go make myself a glass of warm milk, you might aswell go up." Electro Dash was pleased, this was a step in the right direction, for both her and niylon. she made her warm milk, drank it, Then went upstairs to sleep.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon made sure he was ready for tonight he set everything up just as he planed he had a box of chocolates which he put on her side of the bed then he place roses in shape of a heart hopefully this would be enough for his final faze. Niylon wondered how long his spell would last which kept him in this perfect stallion form.


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When Electro Dash went upstairs. she found Niylon Had prepared something. *How can such a stallion prepare all this so quickly yet so fast? Its like he's done this before!* She walked in "oh really, a box of chocolates? you shouldn't have!"

(OOC: you need to work on grammar.)


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon was patience with Electro up to this point."Electro the reason i did this for you is because i wanted tonight to be special for both of us , I wasn't really planing for Celestia to go crazy and attack me. But tonight i want to give you on last gift that's if you want to take that extra step". Niylon began to wonder if it really was enough for him to try his luck with Electro.

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"well yeah i guess. I mean, now i think about it, you've been doing so many nice things for me and i just did'nt think about it." Electro had a vaugue understanding of what Niylon meant by step in teh right direction. "And i guess i do want this to go on, so yeah. Ill accept your gift."

(OOC: You have permission to controll my charecter for now.)

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"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon smiled and gave her a kiss, but this wasn't any normal kiss it was more passionate then the usual peck on the cheek. Niylon held Electro in his hooves as he kissed her. After an hour Niylon began to think maybe now is a good time to move to the final part of his plan, regardless of Electro was ready or not.


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Electro Dash new what would happen next, she Knew that her life could change upon this night, and what niylon Didn't know, was that She was ready for all the things ahead.

In fact, Electro Dash had been ready for weeks. There had been things that niylon had not been told ofm things that must stay secret. nether the less she let the night continue.

(OOC: you can controll my OC for now.)

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"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon looked into her eyes and pulled her onto the bed. Electro was ready for whats to come next her heart quickened in at thought of being with Niylon but was this her or was it something Else."Niylon i love you but i not to sure if i want this". Niylons eyes quickly changed then he spoke in a cold voice."I have waited long enough my dear Electro". Electro couldn't believe what Niylon was going to do she cried softly to herself. After awhile Niylon fell asleep on her bed. Electro was still in shock over what had happen this couldn't be the same sweet stallion she fell in love with maybe he was just in shock over what had happen with Celestia.


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(OOC: oh, that was all you were going to type eh?)

Electro Dash was upset. after what happened she realised she wasn't ready, and that It was too late now.

But things had changed. It was time for her to pull the strings, to become the puppateer. Her tears were in fact fake. this is what she had planned. She new who niylon was, and was prepared to stop him.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon awoke and looked over at Electro he had been foolish to this but he knew he was still in control."I am sorry if i caused you pain my dear i was still upset over what happen to me last night with Celestia. I hope you don't think any less of me". Niylon kept eye contact with Electro to make himself more believable.


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"no no, it's ok. im fine. Broken spine perhaps, but all the same. Sweet celestia your rough!" She got up and walked downstairs to make Breakfast. She waited a couple of hours and then said "Im going to hang out with some friends, you wanna come with or are you fine?"


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon had to think for a moment, his next target was Luna because she was Canterlot royalty. He figured if he had a foal with Luna then that meant his foal with Electro would be next in line for the throne of Equestria. "No you go out and have fun i'll stick around the house and clean". Niylon stayed in the room to make sure Electro left the house.


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"well alright then. C'ya later" she waved to niylon as she left through the front door. But she wasn't really going to hang out, hell she didnt care. Instead she decided to go to canterlot. and inacase niylon went to the station, she decided to fly there instead.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Niylon came out of the house shortly after Electro had left. He was unaware that Electro was going to canterlot a head of him, he started to go the station that would take him to Canterlot. He had it all planed out he'll treat Luna like he did Electro, he'll treat her out to something to eat then he'll romance her.


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Electro Had reached the royal Doors. While a blockade of gurads stopped the protesting ponies, she was aloud right in. She was also allowed to visit celestia

"hello your higness " she said Bowing Down, " i come with bad news. as you know, a pony named niylon invited you over to talk. what you don't know is that he is also the one to start this riot. A future version of you gave a message, that he had escaped from hell to find a mare in the past so his foals could take over. he chose me for this, and so i will tell you now, that he is arriving here to meet luna, and if you dont tell her, she will meet the same fate as I have."


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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Celestia didn't reply she remembered Niylon and how he treated her, she beleived Electro seeing how that this pony must be stopped."Then we'll give him what he has came for but not the way he thinks, Luna could you come here for second"? Luna came forward she heard about the uprisings and the first to get the news about her sister. "Yes what is it"? Celestia didn't smile what she had to say to Luna didn't make it easy for her."I want you to give yourself to Niylon but not right away stall him as long as you need to till the royal guard comes to your aide you understand me"? Luna nod her head but it was hard for her what if she failed what if Niylon saw though her. Meanwhile Niylon was on his way to Canterlot to find and romance Luna then be done with this place.

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Electro Dash Believed she was done here. "well, if im not needed i shall go" she bowed to the two sisters and left the same way she came. she knew that she couldent fly back, else niylon saw her through the train window. So instead, the went to the bar, and waited.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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