My First Poney Drawing ^_^

[WindsweptFrog 52]

I know it's not the best, but that's because I'm not much of an artist but I had spent the day watching MLP so I drew Fluttershy Any pointers on how i can improve it?

[Party Cannon 876]

You will see some very elaborate pieces on this forum, yet I really like yours here. It's relatively simple, yet with these few lines you captured Fluttershy's essence quite well.

 

Good job!

Edited November 22, 2012 by Party Cannon

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

Very nicely done! There are a few size issues, mainly her body is a little long, and her head is a little big. All in all though good job,

[Feather Gem 967]

Its lovely. As its your first, its very well done and simple.

 

Though you may want to increase her height slightly. And narrow her neck a bit. x3

[Pix3M 607]

It helps to look at your reference to see for yourself where your faults are.

 

However, if you need another artist to help out, her legs are proportionally too short as mares like her are about three heads tall if you use the height of the head as a unit of measurement. I counted 2.5 heads, which is about the height of a filly.

 

The top of the nose is also placed too high on the face. Placing it lower will make the nose smaller and thus more cute.

 

Ear could be a larger, and neck appears to be very fat.

 

Pony irises are also not circular. They are ovals.

 

Pegasi wings don't have 5 feathers on their longest row of feathers; they only have three really big ones and a very small one. There should also be three rows of feathers closest to the base of the wing.

 

Front legs flare out in width and are widest at the hoof. The legs here are a bit more uniform.

 

But, this is better than my first attempts anyways. Aside for anatomical crap, the next step should really probably go for a more interesting pose than this.

[WindsweptFrog 52]

-snip-

 

This was brohoofed earlier and I was just looking at it and reading over what you had said again and i saw that she only has three legs? :L Edited November 25, 2012 by WindsweptFrog

[Pix3M 607]

 

This was brohoofed earlier and I was just looking at it and reading over what you had said again and i saw that she only has three legs? :L

 

... seems about right. Show-style ponies put the other leg slightly in front like what was done with the front legs here. Sometimes I forget other little things worth mentioning.

[WindsweptFrog 52]

... seems about right. Show-style ponies put the other leg slightly in front like what was done with the front legs here. Sometimes I forget other little things worth mentioning.

 

I ment to put it just in front of the other back leg just like the front ones but clearly I didn't remember to draw it in, oh well lol

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

I see several flaws in it, but no problem, it's your first drawing, and i like it alot (:

 

And Fluttershy was also my first drawing!(Facing infront of me)and that was a hard one to do cause it was my first one.

But i would love to see more drawings that you make in the future