My very first MLP sketch ever! This is Rarity!

[Cocodrillo 1,566]

Ok.

 

1) The picture is not rotated to the right position.

2) Body is too long and thick

3) Legs are too short

4) The front left hoof is thicker than the rest of the hooves

5) The front right hoof seems to be missing (all in the one line)

6) The back right hoof is in the wrong direction

7) The butt is too "squary"

8) Tail is too high and seems to be way off

9) Cutie mark should be larger (covering almost all of the flank)

10) Mane should be less "pointing out" and should cover her neck

11) Neck is too thin

12) Eyes are too small and seem derped

13) Nose is too pointy and big

14) Mouth is too big, should be near the nosedrills

15) Horn should be bigger and more pointy

16) Ear should be "continuing" of the head, not pointing out.

 

1) Back left hoof&leg are allright

2) Mane and tail design is okay

3) Fine signature

[Sapphire Gem 50]

This was a first time sketch for a first time drawer, of course it's going to have all of those problems. That's why it's stated that it was done in 2 minutes. Thank you.

[Jack A.J 6]

Your drawing is awesome. Unlike you, I can’t draw at all, but I still attempted to draw Applejack and a few others a while back. Nowhere near as good as yours and I’ll show you the proof. Great job again.

[Harmonic Revelations 8,836]

It's really good for a start. The proportions are much closer than I'd expect from someone doing it for the first time. Great work, keep it up!

 

 

Your drawing is awesome. Unlike you, I can’t draw at all, but I still attempted to draw Applejack and a few others a while back. Nowhere near as good as yours and I’ll show you the proof. Great job again. Applejack Drawing.jpg

 

 

I colored it for you. You didn't do bad, actually. I think you did really good on it! I liked it so I put it in color for you. I hope you like it. So what do you think?

 

I upgraded it:

Edited January 17, 2013 by Harmonic Revelations