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Rose's family had abandoned her when she was little, leaving her with nothing. Since her days as a filly, she has felt as if nothing in the world can fix her broken heart. When she found plants however, she saw that she could love something, and it could never leave her. She has decided to have a change of scenery and move to a town called Ponyville.

 

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Name: Rose

 

Age: 18

 

Sex: Female

 

Species: Earth Pony

 

Description: Cream white with Violet hair.

 

Personality: Shy and fragile.

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Name: Mint Green

 

Age: 17

 

Sex: Y-*shot* Male

 

Species: Pegasus

 

Description: I'm be simple and just say my icon. For this RP anyway.

 

Personality: Lonely, with terrible social skills. A bit awkward.

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Rose stepped out of her home, saying her goodbyes to her parents. Their tear stained faces could tell their story, this was not easy for them to do. Rose had felt the same way, but she would not let anypony see her like that. She began to walk on the path of Ponyville to the center of town were all the trainees were going to be rounded up to take to camp.


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Rose saw the massive crowd that was drafted to fight in the war against Discord. One pony in particular stood out in the crowd among the criminals, was a green pony. Rose stared at him for a moment, unable to take her eyes off of him.


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Mint Green sighed, turning back to the railroads. He wasn't sure if she thought of him as dangerous or what, but he did not want to come off as a criminal.


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Whether it was excitement or fear, Mint Green couldn't tell, but the crowd sure was getting rowdy. He walked near the rear, since where he originally was would probably end with him getting knocked onto the tracks. A mustached pony with a microphone began dictating the crowd.

 

"Mares to the left, stallions to the right!"

 

This only caused Mint anxiety, as his curved chin sometimes made older ponies mistake him for a mare from a distance, though usually he was seen as a stallion.


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Mint looked back once more, and saw the pale pony heading right. He tried to turn around to correct her, but a royal guard shoved him forward, telling him to get moving. He got crammed with the others inside the small box car of the train.


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Rose could see that stallions were sorrounding her, which automaticly made her feel uncomfortable. She could see the mares move left, while she was moving right. She tried to break out of the line, but was pushed by the other stallions.


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Mint simply stood, shoved into the back of the burning hot train. He saw the top of Rose's head bobbing up and down, and tried to stay close to the door so he could catch her when she came in.


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Rose stifled a squeak as she felt herself touch another stallion, and she looked up at Mint. She tried to mouth out the words,

 

"I noticed."

 

But could only say

 

"I..."


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Mint simply looked at her. "This is not the cart you are looking for. Perhaps you could get into the ot-" Even before he could finish his sentence, a stallion briefly yelled a muffled command, and the doors to the train closed.

 

"Maybe not..."


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Mint stumbled along with Rose, her bringing him down. Some other stallions, including one of the royal guards, also fell at the sudden start, so Mint and Rose didn't stand out too much. One pony on the train noticed Rose as a mare, causing him to eye the two suspiciously.

 

Green helped Rose back up, brushing off some dust from his mane. "Uh, be careful."


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The train rolled on, and speakers from the corners blared an announcement. "Arrival in two hours." Mint was increasingly annoyed by the horrible treatment of these trainees, they weren't animals.

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