Overmare 117 January 17, 2013 Share January 17, 2013 Hey guys, so, normally I make wallpapers and stuff like that. But, I thought I would give this music thing a try. I've tried music before, but never really liked it much. Anyways, here, have a listen http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNKxmIS_Qdg | Tumblr | DeviantArt | Youtube | Twitter | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowl 128 January 17, 2013 Share January 17, 2013 Overall I thought that your composition was fairly good. I found the middle section of the song to be too repetitive. This is because it is only one or two measures that repeats over and over again. Try making the repeated section longer, or have slight variations in it. You could also add another line of instruments to composition and feature it in that section. Also, how did you make the background for the video? And to all things comes an end. We are no more than pages in a book. Turn the page, and thousands die. And for what? For the greed of two powerful leaders. Turn the page and floods, earthquakes and volcanoes are destroying the world. It is a time for acts of despair and of bravery as well. Another turn of the page and countless refugees flee. Is this the end of the story? No. There are countless pages to turn. And to all things comes a beginning! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overmare 117 January 17, 2013 Author Share January 17, 2013 Overall I thought that your composition was fairly good. I found the middle section of the song to be too repetitive. This is because it is only one or two measures that repeats over and over again. Try making the repeated section longer, or have slight variations in it. You could also add another line of instruments to composition and feature it in that section. Also, how did you make the background for the video? I used one of my wallpapers as a base, then added audio wave forms to the eyes via after effects. It's actually pretty simple, only thing that takes time is the rendering of the video. | Tumblr | DeviantArt | Youtube | Twitter | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pencil Hoof 169 January 17, 2013 Share January 17, 2013 (edited) Hmmm. The creativity is definitely there, and you have a good melody, but there are some technical problems, and some parts get a little "repetitive" because you didn't follow the eight bar rule and stuff. Oh and no outro. But still, with a little more practice and knowledge, I'm sure you'll be awesome... so I subbed to dat Oh, totally forgot to ask... What Programs, synths, hardware (if you have) do you use? Also forgot to mention, I love the visuals in the eyes. Very creative Edited January 17, 2013 by Pencil Hoof God over games Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K3WRO 79 January 17, 2013 Share January 17, 2013 pretty good, If you were me though, I might at least Try to level out the leads or at least use a limiter on them. It's also a bit too repetitive and the sound design is straight out flat. But the melody is great,however, the low ends and the mid points are really bothering me though. It's good, keep doing what you do, you can be incredible if you practice! Please sub to my Youtube if you like my stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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