OC (request)

[Sensuna 138]

I did made this for someone on request so I didn't choose any of the colors or hair style hope you enjoy it and some constructive critique as usual I use paint tool sai and I used a mouse as well 

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

The snout is a little too long and jagged, and the back leg is just a little too skinny. The line of the smile is a bit long as well. Other than that, you did a great job!

[ArtStreak 12]

Hi Sensuna, I'd try making the snout less pointed and the build a little thinner. The lines should be a little more crisp, but other then those minor problems its great

[Sensuna 138]

Thank you both for the support and the pointers I really appreaciate every kind of critique so I tell you again thank you

[Sketchi Inktip Quillwing 97]

I'd say it's really good, but has some proportion issues. The snout seems fine, but the legs are a bit off and the flank is further back. Other than that, it looks good!

[Sensuna 138]

I'd say it's really good, but has some proportion issues. The snout seems fine, but the legs are a bit off and the flank is further back. Other than that, it looks good!

always and I mean always the porportions x.x thanks for pointing it out but I could've seen the hind leg but I always get it wrong in the end probably because I'm looking at it for to long

[Pulcinella 1,016]

It's a blankie flankie! D: It looks good, especially for a mouse drawing. I like the slight bit of shading, good job. The wing and eye look small, and the mane is a bit flat, but other than that, it's great!