pleasedontcomeback 209 February 16, 2013 Share February 16, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS. Edited March 16, 2016 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teddiee 12 February 16, 2013 Share February 16, 2013 The reason why I came here because I thought you were writing a fanfiction about Lucy and Gray from Fairy Tail this anime/manga. And I was just like.. NO. IT'S LUCY AND NATSU. > But.. I'm just cray-cray. XD // Likes to be reffered to as a brony, even though she is a girl. // Instagram: xpinkiepie and hatofiria_lucy // Tumblr: luminouswallflower and teddyxfire // Kik: glassessgurrrl // Has Pinkie Pie and Pinkamena personalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 16, 2013 Author Share February 16, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS. Edited March 16, 2016 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teddiee 12 February 16, 2013 Share February 16, 2013 XD LOL I don't watch anime/manga, but that is funny XD It seems you are cray cray XD I bet lots of people that watch that show are gonna be complaining about this XD Maw. Mehhhh. I'm not sure theres alot of Bronies in the Fairy Tail community. I'm not even sure if there's alot of Fairy Tailers in the Brony community. 8II Whatever. XD // Likes to be reffered to as a brony, even though she is a girl. // Instagram: xpinkiepie and hatofiria_lucy // Tumblr: luminouswallflower and teddyxfire // Kik: glassessgurrrl // Has Pinkie Pie and Pinkamena personalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunbro 4 Lyfe 939 February 16, 2013 Share February 16, 2013 GRAMMAR CHECKS! first you spelt grey wrong. second, whenever a new charecter is talking they begin on a new line. another thing is that I'm not sure fog can get bigger ad bigger. Perhaps "more and more dense " would have been better. And finally, the chapters are too short. "You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 17, 2013 Author Share February 17, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS.TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS. Edited March 16, 2016 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teddiee 12 February 18, 2013 Share February 18, 2013 GRAMMAR CHECKS! first you spelt grey wrong. second, whenever a new charecter is talking they begin on a new line. another thing is that I'm not sure fog can get bigger ad bigger. Perhaps "more and more dense " would have been better. And finally, the chapters are too short. You need capital letters at the start of your sentence, Charecter is spelt character. And you spelt and as ad. ^-^ Just to let ya know. Because, you had quite alot of mistakes there. // Likes to be reffered to as a brony, even though she is a girl. // Instagram: xpinkiepie and hatofiria_lucy // Tumblr: luminouswallflower and teddyxfire // Kik: glassessgurrrl // Has Pinkie Pie and Pinkamena personalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunbro 4 Lyfe 939 February 18, 2013 Share February 18, 2013 @@Teddiee, Yeah. I tend to forget capitals when i'm not typing on rp's as well as miss letters. And I always seem to spell character wrong but that's just me so... "You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teddiee 12 February 19, 2013 Share February 19, 2013 @@Teddiee, Yeah. I tend to forget capitals when i'm not typing on rp's as well as miss letters. And I always seem to spell character wrong but that's just me so... :/ I only do perfect grammar when I feel like it. But when I'm lazy I go all like.. yeah, so how are you? im fine. yup. good. you too. Or whatever the heck I say. I just always remember to put full stops and commas. o_o Like apostrophes are fine to forget, because nobody really notices it and it technically isn't a grammatical error. Like isnt and isn't. Nobody notices those. :I But maybe with I'm and Im. That's just wrong. e.e Dude, that's like me when I spell necessary. I'm not sure where which s goes where, where the c goes and in the end I'll have to search it up. XD See, before I spelt it like nessascary. :/ Like, wrong. XD Before, like last year I was like.. what? Nessessary? Nesescary? Ad J just tried like a million different spellings before I gave up and searched it up. XD Lol. // Likes to be reffered to as a brony, even though she is a girl. // Instagram: xpinkiepie and hatofiria_lucy // Tumblr: luminouswallflower and teddyxfire // Kik: glassessgurrrl // Has Pinkie Pie and Pinkamena personalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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