The Eaths Uprising (Fanfic)

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Chapter 1

 

(Authors note, I cant format this any better [better format here http://www.fimfictio...arths-uprising]

 

It was a calm day, a light breeze was blowing through; a fine day, It

was a warm breeze the sort that tingles against your skin and makes you

feel warm at heart, The Cakes were baking and the smell drifted through

the air a smooth aroma of cinamon and sugar. The sun is heading over to

the east about two hours past midday, It was an uplifting sight for

anypony to see

Pinkie was walking around on a

kindly stroll browsing the stalls of the market  lifting up each

individual item she found examining it, even if it looked perfect.  She

then trotted over to Applejack's stall for apples.

Heya Applejack!" Pinkie-pie exclaimed.

"Howdy Pinkie, what brings you here ?" Applejack Asked.

"Just thought I would come say hi!" She replied happily.

"Well fancy that, an earth pony thinking!" Scoffed an unfamiliar unicorn in the distance.

"And what's that s'posed to mean par'ner?" Asked an Insulted Applejack.

"Oh how typical, The cowgirl doesn't know what we mean; big surprise 'Par'ner'.”

"Hey that's not very nice! You should watch what you say!" Blurted Pinkie.

"Oh here we go..." Continued the unicorn.

"Now listen 'ere. Jus' who do y' think y' are?" Inquired Applejack.

"Oh sorry, I forgot you were a lowly earth pony, I'm Fancypants" He replied.

"Hey Fancypants what's going on?" Asked the Pegasus who had just landed there next to him.

" Earth pony riff raff" He replied with a scoff

"Why are you even talking to them?" The Pegasus asked, curious about the situation.

"The pink one had claimed to have thought..." He said with a smirk on his face.

"Wait, what? Are you serious?" The Pegasus burst into fake laughter.

"Now

wait just a second mister! You're not being nice! You're being mean!

You're being double mean!" Exclaimed Pinkie pie, rather infuriated at

the ponies in front of her.

"Now you listen ere! I may not be the smartest pony out there-" Said Applejack, before getting cut off mid sentence.

"Well

of course you're not smart, you're an Earth pony! The underdogs of the

Equestria! We can move the sun and stars! And what can you do, grow

apples? I'm pretty sure I can do that too." The large Unicorn scoffed.

"As

I was saying, I may not be the smartest pony out here but I can tell

when your just being plain mean." Said Applejack calmly.

"What? I'm not being mean." He scoffed again "I'm just stating the obvious" He continued

"Racist prick." Applejack muttered under her breath.

"I'm sorry but I didn't quite catch that." Said Fancypants with a nasty smile on his face.

"I think she's trying to insult us Fancy." Added the Pegasus

"I'm

not sure, but there is a chance I didn't quite catch what she said.”

The Unicorn turned to Applejack. “ Would you mind repeating yourself?"

Just

then, something moved from behind the counter. A large red mass seemed

to be rather angry; Big Macintosh was not amused. He walked over to

Applejack and stood there, towering over Fancypants. Fancypants looked

up at the large Stallion. Big Macintosh was quite intimidating.

"You want to know what mah sister said?" Big Macintosh growled

"Y-Yes please do tell." Fancy said slightly stuttering, trying to keep up his appearance of importance.

"She said that YOU'RE A RACIST PRICK!" Screamed Big Mac, startling Fancypants.

"NOW I WANT YOU TO REPEAT EVERYTHING YOU JUST SAID TO MAH SISTER TO ME!" Big Mac continued to scream at the Unicorn.

"Oi! back off!" The Pegasus interrupted. Big Mac glared at the Pegasus and he instantly became quiet.

"Well?" Said Big Mac.

"I-I....ugh.....um said there ummmm-" Fancypants was Quivering.

"Spit it out!" Said Big Mac.

"I-I-I.........." He continued, his pride shattered.

"Wait

I'll do it for you, you arrogant piece of s-" Big Mac cut himself off

and bit his lip. He wasn't going to lower himself to this Unicorn's

standards again.

"You thought you could be racist

to mah little sister, and nopony would come out and protect her from two

cowards such as yourselves! Leave before ah' snap that 'horn' coming

out of your head with mah hind legs!" Big Mac lowered his head, meeting

Fancypants at eye level. Fancypants took his warning and ran. Upon

seeing the Unicorn depart, the Pegasus did not need to wait around for

Big Mac's fury and bolted before anything more could be said.

Applejack

stood there, shocked and unsure of how to respond to what Big Macintosh

had just said. She looked past the apple stand where Big Mac had been

napping and saw Pinkie, her hair completely deflated and she was crying.

Once again to her surprise, Big Mac was the first one to speak with

whole sentences, not just the trademark 'Eeyup'.

"Pinkie-Pie.

It's okay. He's a horrible pony who shouldn't say those things to us.

I'm pretty sure after the show I just put on he won't be saying those

things for a while." Said Big Mac, trying to reassure her.

"B-but that's not the first time Somepony has said mean things to me..." Tears began to form in her eyes.

"Now

listen Pinkie. Some ponies these days are just plain horrible. They

show no feeling towards us and it ain't right.” He chuckled to

himself.  “This is probably the first time you've ever really seen me

get angry isn't it? Well that's 'cause I had the same issue when I was

just a colt, and ah know it's horrible! If any Unicorn or Pegasus gives

you any trouble, let me know okay?" He finished.

"O-okay" Said Pinkie with a small smile on her face.

"Pinkie

ah wish I could explain more but it jus' aint right! Ponies shouldn't

be like this to one another, what would princess Celestia think of all

this?" Applejack joined in.

"I don't know, she's

everything, so she cant really be spoken to like that anyway. But I

guess she wouldn't like it at all." Said Pinkie. Applejack was trying

her hardest trying not to cry. It would only make matters worse, but

tears started welling up in her eyes at the thought of other ponies

joining in with Fancypants, shouting and insulting them because they

were Earth ponies.

"Applejack, It's okay I know how you feel." Said Big Mac.

"I

jus'...” She paused.

“I can't understand why somepony would be like

that, it's absolutely horrible.”

 

She looked up at Big Mac with a

confused expression on her face.

 

"Ah think it would just be best if we forgot about it an' finished selling our apples." Suggested Big Mac.

End Chapter One

 

P.S. This is only the beginning there is more to the story. AND MCYAV IS AWESOME! (Thank you for editing this )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Chapter 2

 

                    

                        

{Six hours had passed since the Incident with Big Macintosh and Fancypants}

The

night was slowly setting in, the crisp clean air slowly breezing

through Ponyville. It was cold, but also clean and fresh. Octavia was

setting up for her night performance in an outdoor restaurant just by

the beach; the whole place was candle lit, the dim lighting that was

good for a romantic meal, or just a beautiful night out. All the ponies

were sitting in cabanas, enjoying their fresh gourmet meals.

Octavia

took in the beautiful night and walked over to the stage, glancing over

her large audience; The setting was just how she liked it, a small and

elegant scene. She then adjusted her bow tie and pulled out a stool from

underneath the stage, made of lovely mahogany, the same as her cello.

It was matching and Octavia felt warm at heart. Still there was

something wrong she could not quite put her finger on. She then pulled

out a large instrument case, undid the clips and pulled the large

mahogany cello out; She then went to grab her bow when a magical blue

aura surrounded it. She reached for out to reach it, but it was moved

just out of the way. Octavia was not pleased. She tried again, but it

still kept moving. After a few attempts, the bow was hovering a few feet

above her. Instinctively, she tried to jump, hoping to reach the bow,

but the magical force lifted it higher. The crowd of ponies’ began to

laugh. A demeaning laugher, mocking her incapability to reach her one

prise possession. Giving up on her futile attempts, she glanced over to

the crowd of ponies. That was when she realised. Upon seeing the crowd, a

large number of unicorns and pegasi could be seen. But no earth ponies.

With recent events around Equestria suggesting that racism was

widespread, Octavia suddenly felt herself shiver in fear.

“Oh

Octavia. What a waste of a talented pony such as yourself” Said an

unidentified unicorn from the crowd. The silhouette began approaching

the stage, passing through dim lights as it made its way forward.

“I don’t understand. What do you mean waste?”

Said Octavia, obviously shocked at the comment. As she spoke, the

unicorn emerged from the crowd; her mane and tail coloured blue and

white, while her coat remained light blue coat adorned with an hour

glass cutie mark.

“Your an earth pony, the weakest and most useless ponies in all of Equestria.” Said Colgate, still holding Octavia’s bow in the air. At least she knew who's aura it was.

“Oof that is the most horrible thing I’ve ever heard anypony say!” Octavia spat out in disgust.

“Let me prove it to you. Get your bow back Octavia. Go on. Get It!” She said with a vicious smirk on her face.

“I-I-I can’t get it...” The Grey musician replied stuttering

“Get it! Go on!” said Colgate, her rant continuing.

“N-no I can’t!“ Octavia said sadly, the tears welling up in her eyes.

“My point exactly. You are an inferior race. All of you are just slaves to the unicorn and pegasi. For we, are the superior!” Colgate testified.

“You

horrible self centred monster! We are all equal! How dare you utter

these horrible things it’s-it’s racist!” Said Octavia still shocked from

the comments she had received.

“I’m not being

racist, I’m just stating the obvious. The only thing you Earth ponies

can do Is grow food. I bet if we Unicorn and Pegasi did this, we could

farm to just as easily and more than likely better.” Stated the blue unicorn.

“How can you say something like this it’s absolutely horrible!” Octavia said trying to hold back the tears.

“Why don’t you just take your horrible Earth pony music and beat it, slag,

your just dirtying the place up with your presence here.” Colgate

finished her attack with a look of disappointment and shame on her face.

The tears Octavia had tried to hold back broke free, running down her

face, turning the her perfect night into a nightmares paradise.

“Yeah get out of here, you earth pony filth!” Called one Unicorn

“Yeah

you suck, get out!” Another Unicorn joined in. Octavia felt herself

break. Her confidence gone, and her feelings destroyed. She ran for

exit, dropping her cello along the way. With a mighty crack, splintering

into hundreds of pieces as it fell. Taking no time to check, Octavia

threw herself through the doors and out, into Ponyville.

In the early hours of the morning, Applejack spotted a grey mare,

curled up on a bench. She wasn't used to any other ponies being up at

this hour.

“Is that you Octavia?” said Applejack. Octavia ceased crying.

“Yes. Yes it is. I’m sorry you have to see me like this.” She said, trying to retain any pride she once had.

“Aw don’t worry bout’ it, what’s wrong?” The orange pony asked, her eyes full of compassion.

“The

unicorns and pegasi......were...w......ww...” said Octavia unable to

finish her sentence before bursting into tears again. Applejack grabbed

Octavia and held her close.

“It's okay sugarcube. Sometimes ponies are just damn mean. Don't let 'em get to ya.”

Octavia tried to fight back her tears, but didn't say anything.

“I

think Big Mac might want to say a few words to those ponies you met,

come on, I'll take ya back to the farm.” Said Applejack with a

reassuring smile.

Once again a major credit to the great and powerful Mcyav for editing my story at his own will

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Chapter 3

 

                    

                        

Nine months had passed since the incident with Octavia and

Colgate.  Racism had become a common thing and the earth ponies had

become the lower class; frowned upon by the Unicorns and pegasi.

Big

Mac stood outside with Octavia, looking far into the crimson red sunset

that was falling over the green meadow of the Canterlot royal palace,

leaving the blue walls of the castle a ginger orange.  The beautiful

sunset seemed out of place with recent events.  Nowhere in Equestria had

escaped the new found hatred, yet sometimes, something simple and

beautiful would make its way through.

The long silence between the two seemed to last for an eternity before Big Mac broke it..

"Eeyup" He said looking over into the graceful sunset.

Octavia

looked at him.  She knew that he was just trying to break the silence

so that they could finally talk.  Looking at him with droopy eyes and a

forced smile, she waited for him to notice.  Instead, Big Mac looked

down at the filthy ground of the barn; it hadn't been cleaned in over 6

months.

"You know if Appleja-"Said Big Macintosh before being cut off by the grey mare

"Yes, I know...” She paused for a moment.

“Why

has all of this happened?  What did we do to deserve this?  This

horrible world, the way it is, ...I wish.....I wish things were the way

they used to be.  Like in the stories, the way they used to tell us when

we were younger, with the 3 kingdoms.  The three races, pulling

together and making harmony, uniting together and building a nation! But

no longer.  We've become savages, placing titles before ponies.  There

will always be a higher class, respected across the land.  And there

will always be a lower class, one that is frowned upon, spat on and

kicked into the gutters. We're nothing but rats scurrying in search of

our next meal..." Octavia began to cry.

Each tear trickling down her face, leaving damp streaks in their wake.

Big Mac just looked down and didn't say anything, he just nodded his head sadly agreeing with her.

"How many have been taken?  How many of our friends and our family have we lost to them? How could we let this

happen...?”  Forcing back her tears, Octavia continued.

“They

have torn apart families and taken our friends and for what!  For their

own gain?  Our own have turned into monsters.  Ponies we trusted and

cared for.  We lost Applejack and Pinkie Pie, stolen from us!  Forced

into slavery by the unicorns and pegasi. We escaped.....but at what

cost...?"  Octavia fell over and burst into tears, sobbing deeply as she

cried.

Big Mac tried to put his hoof over and stroke her but it was smacked away.

He

then looked back towards Ponyville.  It was exactly the same as it was

nine months ago, yet so much had changed.  Down there they were selling

earth ponies off by the bit, keeping them caged in tiny little 3 by 3

boxes, held by magical locks.

"C'mon Octavia, we best be getting

inside.  They cant get us in the barn, its surrounded by Everfree

tree's, It was... Applejack's idea... she planted them in hopes we

wouldn't be found." Big Mac shed a tear thinking of Applejack.

Night

took over the land quickly. In what seemed like an instant, the dusk

blue night sky lit up. The bright the full white moon sent light all

over the land, illuminating the world, allowing ponies to stroll under

the night sky.

Down in Ponyville there was a

meeting for the  unicorn and pegasi.  They held the meeting in

Twilight's Library and put up a forcefield so no outsider could hear or

see what they were screaming.

Fancy pants stood over the Unicorn

and pegasi on a large wooden block. He looked down and frowned at the

fellow unicorns his eyes narrowed and looked around the room, he stopped

on one pony in particular. He stared at the unicorn and began to talk

"Who

are you? You were never invited to this meeting; Nor have I ever seen

you before. Identify yourself or I will be forced to remove you." He

said strongly not moving a single muscle in his face. He was not happy;

He couldn't risk a single earth pony being in there for it could ruin

his plans.

"I am just a spectator just observing

how one of these meetings go, Is that fine by you?" A drop of sweat

dropped down from the white ponies head as she said this, her yellow

mane fell down to her  hooves and dragged along the floor, she swayed it

side to side trying to get the one bead of sweat hoping no one was

notice that she was stressed.

"Liar, you must be

invited to one of these meetings. You can't just waltz in here, every

unicorn and pegasus knows that! I can't continue this meeting knowing

that you could be an earth pony."  said Fancy pants he moved to his side

and grinned. Then a faint blue Aura appeared around Fancy pants horn

"This is the last chance you are going to get, Identify yourself. Or else."Fancy Pants grimaced.

"I

already told you! I'm just here to spectat-" Said the anonymous pony

before her hair was covered in a blue aura. The Aura pulled backwards

and ripped out hair, fake hair.

"This isn't real

hair it's a disguise, what about that horn?" Fancy pants' horn lit up

one more time trying to pull at her horn. Nothing happened.

"WHAT ARE YOU TRING TO DO?!, RIP MY HORN OF!" Yelled out the anonymous pony in a scratchy voice.

"Vinyl scratch?" Said a pegasus from the crowd.

"No it cant be she's blonde!" Said another.

She

started hyperventilating, realizing that she had been discovered,beads

of sweat started forming on her forehead, dripping down her face and on

to her mane, the fake colours started to fall out revealing a blue

colour mane underneath.

"TRAITOR! INFERIOR SPY! GET HER!" Screeched Fancy pants

Vinyl

wasn't slow to begin running, she ran up the stairs at full pace with

an army of pegasi and Unicorns chasing her. She smashed through

Twilights bedroom door and kept running, heading towards the gigantic

window looming over Twilights bed and jumped through it, knocking the

telescope and cutting open her leg. She hit the ground with a snap, 2 of

her ribs had fractured from the gigantic fall. Ignoring the pain she

ran towards the Everfree forest at full pace.

Fancy Pants stopped following her, he stopped in Twilights room and spoke,

"No one follow her just watch to see where she goes."

Fancy

Pants slowly trotted up the stairs leading to Twilights bed, avoiding

the shattered glass of the newly broken window. He could feel the cool

night air pass through his mane, it was refreshing and not something he

wasn't used to. He looked to his side to see blood on the telescope.

Curious, he looked into it and watched vinyl run into the forest.

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Vinyl

arrived at sweet apple acres which was now covered in dense forest, the

pain of her ribs and leg were now beginning to sink in and hurt. She

began to cry in pain while screaming out for Big Mac and Octavia, the

tears rolled down her face and onto the ground and began to mix with the

blood which was coming from her leg. She could no longer move.

Finally

the trees began to move and open a pathway to the barn and  Big Mac

came galloping out to see Vinyl, battered and bruised; without talking

he dragged her back to the barn, with the trees closing around him

after. He got Vinyl inside and immediately attended to her wounds, she

had a very deep cut in her leg and Big Mac began to wonder how she ran

from Ponyville to Sweet apple acres, she explained the whole story to

him leaving him baffled and sorry for her at smell was

"Well any

ways you best be heading off to bed now we all need the rest" Said big

macintosh putting on a genuine smile. Vinyl simply did what she was told

and limped off to her newly made bed.

In the early

hours of the morning, the morning dew was on the grass, leaving a smell

of fresh air to float on through the barn. Octavia awoke from her sleep

dazed, she needed to use the toilet;she groggily fell out of the bed

and stared making her way outside. She walked out the front door and

went by the tree. The day started rapidly getting brighter, and the

fresh dew smell started to disappear and the smell of smoke began to

take its place. Immediately she thought big Mac had started cooking

already, she turned around and started making her way back to the barn,

the blank dull expression on her face changed to a shock and horror. Her

eyes sunk back and heart dropped. She tried to yell but was unable too

instead a murmured squeal escaped her lungs, she then realized the

trouble big Mac and Vinyl were in, and she screamed.

"FIRE, GET

OUT THE BARN NOW!!,BIG Mac!!,VINYL GET OUT THE BARN!" She yelled as

loudly as possible, she looked at the horrific sight of the barn burning

down, to the corner of her eye she saw two Pegasi flying away at full

speed, making their escape.

Big Mac and Vinyl burst

out the door, Big Mac's coat was singled and he has partly black, all

three of them just stared at the flaming building in horror.

"This is the last straw, I'm going to get those unicorns and pegasi if it's the last thing I do." Said Big Mac

That Vinyl is a spy :3,

                        

        

                   

                       

        

                   

 

Yeah guys sorry i havent actually finished writing this yet i think i have like another 4 or 5 chapters to go before i finish