visual art A Drawing - Critique Welcome

[MuLeKsI 161]

Ok, here is my latest drawing. I tried a new style again, what do you guys think about it? 

 

Critique is very welcome. 

 

The picture itself portraits a German Eastern Front soldier of SS wearing a m40 trench coat.

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you know, it doesn't look bad. I think that the style for this works well and I would love to see this kind of style in a bigger piece. A much more dramatic facial expression would help out a lot and would probably attract me more to the piece and to be honest it kind of looks like his head is sticking out a little too far but I like it.

[MuLeKsI 161]

you know, it doesn't look bad. I think that the style for this works well and I would love to see this kind of style in a bigger piece. A much more dramatic facial expression would help out a lot and would probably attract me more to the piece and to be honest it kind of looks like his head is sticking out a little too far but I like it.

 

Thanks for the Critique, I appreciate it.

 

And I do agree that the facial expression could be a bit more dramatic, but Im not that used to drawing realistic looking faces, so I was paying more attention to detail on the face rather than the expression. x3