How should I improve my music?

[ReGen 1,466]

Dunno if this should be a blog entry, but oh well.

 

*Ahem* In case you don't know, I aspire to be a great House/DNB musician when i'ma big boy. So I figured I should start early.

 

Now, I don't use anything fancy like FL Studio or Abelton. Nooooooo! I have a Google Chromebook! I have to use Audiosauna! It's okay... 

 

So hopefully somebody will come around and say how awful my music is! 

 

Oh? You need examples? Fine... 

 

Here are the two recent songs I made:

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWMqs5Huofo

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V-Qsq1rFETg

 

More examples heer: https://soundcloud.com/rainbow-nova

 

So.... How can I make my music better? 

[Gay Bird 421]

Don't put yourself down, this is better than anything I can make in Logic Pro! The best thing to do is to do is to make lots of music, and always be working on something. The more you do the better you get. Also, don't delete old project files. Continue to refine them even after you think they're finished. I don't remember who said this, but "A work of art is never finished, only abandoned." I'd recomend putting a bit more variety on it and layering more stuff, and also mixing the levels of each bit so that one particular thing doesn't drown out everything else. I like your music so far, great job!