Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 "A mistake? Not a pure knight? A disaster? Where are you getting these ideas?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 "My mother, alright! All of my friends! You can't be told by all of these people and not take it to heart!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (I might be imagining this scene a little too vivid. I'm starting to get teary eyed. This is awesome. Development, go!) Garth put a claw on Shy. "Don't believe them. You're different but no more different than I am from other griffins and Breeze is from other ponies." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 (Lol. Welcome to the monent's when my experience shines <3) Shy flower looked over at him. "No offense, but one griffin against many other pony's saying I am an abomination is not much of a difference. I am an earth pony for equestria's sake!" he looked back down. "I am not useless.... I need to show the king how usefull I am... I need to show everyone... I am not useless..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (edited) (And the fact that I made my character so bucking blunt that he won't stop ) Garth resorted to his favorite method. He punched Shy. "Enough! You are Shy Flower. It doesn't matter what others thing, me included. What matters is what YOU think. And you are useful; you are able to use magic even though you lack a horn." Edited October 22, 2011 by Linguz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 This song is going on the entire time :3 I picture this scene so MUCH. It started to to rain as shy flower looked down. The rain rained over his face as his tears streamed down his face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (If I shed any tears, congratulations. You've made me do something I haven't done in ages. Not yet though.) Garth walks next to the earth unicorn and stretches his wing over him, stopping the rain from hitting Shy's face. "You'll prove all those who called you a monster wrong by bringing back the king's daughter, you'll see." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 (If I shed any tears, congratulations. You've made me do something I haven't done in ages. Not yet though.) Garth walks next to the earth unicorn and stretches his wing over him, stopping the rain from hitting Shy's face. "You'll prove all those who called you a monster wrong by bringing back the king's daughter, you'll see." "How could an abomination do anything for the kingdom. I am just a waste of space. I don't even know why the king would send me out here. I am such a wonderful knight. His mother and everyone else hates him, and he is expected to help the kingdom. What does she want of me!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (Damn you. Using your phone now is screwing with you. I could barely comprehend what you said. What's up with the 'I am such a wonderful knight' by the way?) "How could you say that? You cooked for me and cured my bruise, how could you be a waste of space. If the king sent you out here, it's for a reason. You ARE a wonderful knight and I don't hate you." Garth put a comforting arm around Shy. "Now calm down. You keep looping back to what other's think; stop that." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 (Damn you. Using your phone now is screwing with you. I could barely comprehend what you said. What's up with the 'I am such a wonderful knight' by the way?) "How could you say that? You cooked for me and cured my bruise, how could you be a waste of space. If the king sent you out here, it's for a reason. You ARE a wonderful knight and I don't hate you." Garth put a comforting arm around Shy. "Now calm down. You keep looping back to what other's think; stop that." (It was sarcasm)"It is hard not to. Whenever your mother calls you a mistake, it kind of sticks with you." Shy flower looked up at the sky. (Lol I am not using my phone. I just didnt space right.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (edited) (I considered it might've been, but then took on Garth's Point of View and thought: He wouldn't know sarcasm from normal talk.) Garth sighed. "You think you're the only one here who has a hard past? I don't get affected by mine anymore, but it's still there. My father threw me out of our clan and exiled me when I was eight because I lost my first tournament fight; I lost it because my father ignored my training and only trained my sister." (Remember when I said all I say is 100% true related to my story? Yep.) Edited October 22, 2011 by Linguz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 Shy flower looked up at garth. "I am so sorry." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 Garth waved a claw. "Don't mention it. Like I said, I've gotten over it. Four years after I was exiled; I returned and challenged my ex-tribe to a dual to the death for supremacy. My sister had taken my father's position at the lead of the tribe so I fought her instead and, since I'm here, won. I gave up the leadership position to travel around with Blaze though, and I must say that I chose correctly." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 Garth waved a claw. "Don't mention it. Like I said, I've gotten over it. Four years after I was exiled; I returned and challenged my ex-tribe to a dual to the death for supremacy. My sister had taken my father's position at the lead of the tribe so I fought her instead and, since I'm here, won. I gave up the leadership position to travel around with Blaze though, and I must say that I chose correctly." Shy flower smiled."Thanks Garth..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (If anyone ever says I don't put my OCs through hell; they would be so bucking wrong.) "Heh, no problem. But it doesn't seem like the rain understands that the mood has past. Let's get under some cover." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 "Yeah...ok." Shy flower slowly moved under a tree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 [AWESOME] Garth and Shy (and I guess Autumn) sat under a tree, sheltering them from the rain. "This is going to slow us down sufficiently." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 Shy flower looked up. "Yeah, i know.." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 (Was listening to Winter (Gilda) ANSI thought about this. It's the song flipped around. A griffin is trying to console a pony.) Garth glanced at Shy and Autumn before returning his gaze at the road. "Can you do anything a unicorn can do or just some spells?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 "I honestly don't know. All I know is when I concentrate really hard on something... It just happens." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 "That sounds... vague. Have you tried using it like a unicorn uses magic?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 He looked over at Garth. "If any pony saw my magic, it would disgrace my family. I have never been able to pracitce anything." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 "We can't have that." Garth snatched a rock off the ground and opened his palm upwards. "Let's test it out. Lift this rock up." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 October 22, 2011 Author Share October 22, 2011 Shy flower looked at garth. *He is not going to stop until I try...* Shy flower looked at the rock and started to concentrate on it. *Come on.... Move...* The rock began to eminate a low glow and slowly began to rise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linguz 140 October 22, 2011 Share October 22, 2011 "You do have the power of levitation, albeit weak from lack of use." The rain began to die down. "I wouldn't be amazed if you're a unicorn in an earth pony's body, a earth unicorn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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