my first Derpy and her muffin

[kain17 88]

Very well done, I should mention one thing you should put a little more work on though.

 

 

The front left hoof, I see you tried to make us look from beneath/sideways from the left hoof but that line you made there to make it look that way seems to be very out of place,it doesn't fit with the posture the picture is in aka it is a "picture taken sideways".. but then her hoof suddenly goes a bit more to the left so we can see beneath it? That seems out of place.

 

Anyway, that is the only real critism I can give. Good drawing.

thx i can see what you are saying and i didn't even notice it. i will watch for that on my next pic and i always love some good critics.