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[Allan Murray 3]

I had to re-read that because you do sound like you know what you are doing.

 

Such luscious synth and strings. It's so bittersweet. :')

 

It's really great, you should be proud of what you've done. I also imagine that it's harder to rap than it is to sing, because you will be more conscious of your delivery and have to put more into the inflection than a singer would. Loved it, even if it did make me leak some liquid pride.

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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[Toastie 109]

Really nice rap, especially for your first Rap. You've certainly got a voice for it, when I do things for the first time I get really shy so my voice just a monotone mumble. Good to see you don't have the same problem as me.

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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[Toastie 109]

 

Oh no, don't get me wrong, each bar was a ton of takes. That really is the best I can do at the moment. I just started rapping a month and a half ago.

 

 

Yeah was expecting you to say that, would be surprised if it didn't take tons of takes for the great final product. And if it was only a month and a half ago it's more the reason to be proud of it if you can produce that in such a short period.

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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[Toastie 109]

 

"When you say it's done, it's done. Your next one will be better."

 

That's the strangest realization I have had in a while, funny thing is your 100% right, been finding that out with my drawing at the moment. I started about 2 weeks and there is already a huge improvement. Thanks for the heads up with that. 

[Iridian 71]

I'm almost crying - and I usually don't come close to crying when I listen to stuff, but the lyrics are so sad and pretty. You're really good at rapping! It doesn't sound like your first at all. Great job.

Edited March 31, 2013 by Iridian

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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[captainawesomeduckeh 11]

It's really good!  You shouldn't put yourself down like that, for your first time this is really good.  I bet you will become a really good rapper as you practice more.

Edited April 1, 2013 by captainawesomeduckeh

[Mlpfan185 1,763]

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