rainbow factory(blood warning)

[kiwitwist 21]

this is still just a WIP but i think it looks pretty spectacular right now <3

tell what your thoughts on it so far

Critique are much appreciated

 

 

p.s. the whole gas mask thing is a headcanon of mine >w>

[LeJAKoJAK 49]

Ok, I've gotta say, that is really creepy, and I love it. I think it's a cool pic. One thing that I recommend you do (And is something you might have already planned to do), is to work on the blood splatters. Right now, the blood on the wings are just meh, and could be better. They don't look like realistic blurry blood stains. And the blood under the eyes are an interesting splatter, but if you are going more realistic, then you should probably make them less like lines and more like a real splatter. Maybe you can splatter some paint onto a canvas or something and base the blood splatter off of it.

 

But overall, it's a great piece. It's creepy, the gas mask is a great touch, the pony body is great, and I like it. I can't wait to see how it ends up.

[Rainblow H. Ash 5,091]

JAKoJAK has some good advice, but other than what he said, this picture is freaking awesome. It's freaking and epic, and I actually thought it was a picture of a pony model with a gas mask on at first. I actually think it looks that good!

 

So keep up the good work, and I bet the final result is going to be freaking amazing!

[kiwitwist 21]

Ok, I've gotta say, that is really creepy, and I love it. I think it's a cool pic. One thing that I recommend you do (And is something you might have already planned to do), is to work on the blood splatters. Right now, the blood on the wings are just meh, and could be better. They don't look like realistic blurry blood stains. And the blood under the eyes are an interesting splatter, but if you are going more realistic, then you should probably make them less like lines and more like a real splatter. Maybe you can splatter some paint onto a canvas or something and base the blood splatter off of it.

 

But overall, it's a great piece. It's creepy, the gas mask is a great touch, the pony body is great, and I like it. I can't wait to see how it ends up.

i probably should stated it before but the parts that are unfinished are the the blood splatters,the mask,and touching up the mane(so orange and yellow dont look the same) but have some good points how to make them more realistic and i will definatley keep it in mind when i go to finish it

 

JAKoJAK has some good advice, but other than what he said, this picture is freaking awesome. It's freaking and epic, and I actually thought it was a picture of a pony model with a gas mask on at first. I actually think it looks that good!

 

So keep up the good work, and I bet the final result is going to be freaking amazing!

you are definatley not the first pony to think it was a 3D model. many of my IRL friends also said it looked reather 3D

and thank you i will. its comments like yours that makes an artist want to keep going <3