Mane Six and the Magnificent Butterfly (Chapter One)

[Peregrine 5]

After Princess Luna receives a disturbing message from Nightmare Moon, she recruits Princess Twilight Sparkle and her friends to go searching for her missing court unicorn, Nightgate. The Mane Six must find Nightgate and the powerful spellbook he has before somepony else does or everypony could face the greatest Nightmare ever...

 

Chapter One: Waning Moon

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lcTEAnZKR85T35_ncjjnfoa96s-TCeLjO0hLYlV17zc/edit

 

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

You know, it's absolutely silly to put out a link that people have to request to have access just to read.  You're going to find that a bulk of the people that would've read it leaving since they're not going to take the time to request access for a story when they could just search elsewhere for a read instead.  It's a step that people don't want to have. 

 

How to fix that?  Go to your document and look for the 'search' button.  There, you'll see that by clicking it you'll get different options.  Click on the one that allows sharing.  Even better, maybe add on the 'allow comments' as well.  Doing that, anyone that wants to leave a comment can. 

 

Why do that?  It allows the readers to point out mistakes or their thoughts on any matter to what they're reading.  So if there's a grammar mistake, they can point it out.  If they feel you're not characterizing things in a good manner or feel like saying something to help a scene or just throw in some ideas, they can do that too.  Also, there's a dialogue box there that allows instant chatting akin to Skype.

 

Also, even on G-Docs, I may bring some things over here to point out as well.  It's not to showcase your flaws, it's to show others what is wrong so that they can see for their own writing what to do or not do.  It's something I feel helps any writer out by doing that. I can also get more in-depth here than I could over at G-Docs on certain things to explain some areas for a better understanding on how to correct future writings.

Edited May 8, 2013 by Hazardus_Havard

[Peregrine 5]

You know, it's absolutely silly to put out a link that people have to request to have access just to read.  You're going to find that a bulk of the people that would've read it leaving since they're not going to take the time to request access for a story when they could just search elsewhere for a read instead.  It's a step that people don't want to have. 

 

How to fix that?  Go to your document and look for the 'search' button.  There, you'll see that by clicking it you'll get different options.  Click on the one that allows sharing.  Even better, maybe add on the 'allow comments' as well.  Doing that, anyone that wants to leave a comment can. 

 

Why do that?  It allows the readers to point out mistakes or their thoughts on any matter to what they're reading.  So if there's a grammar mistake, they can point it out.  If they feel you're not characterizing things in a good manner or feel like saying something to help a scene or just throw in some ideas, they can do that too.  Also, there's a dialogue box there that allows instant chatting akin to Skype.

 

Also, even on G-Docs, I may bring some things over here to point out as well.  It's not to showcase your flaws, it's to show others what is wrong so that they can see for their own writing what to do or not do.  It's something I feel helps any writer out by doing that. I can also get more in-depth here than I could over at G-Docs on certain things to explain some areas for a better understanding on how to correct future writings.

Whoops. totally didn't think of that...first time doncha know. I'll see if I can fix it. Hopefully those poies who did see that will come read it again.

 

Alright sorry everypony who tried to read it I forgot to make it public but I think I fixed it now. Let me know if it is not mmkay?