Luna + New Style ( feedback appreciated )

[NightOwl 912]

Hey everypony! 

 

So I got around to drawing Luna and decided to only use different types of pencil. As always I used an image of Luna from deviant art for reference. 

 

Original image: http://browse.deviantart.com/art/Princess-Luna-292421213

 

 

Let me know what you think

 

 

[NekromantiaFox 270]

There are some slight anatomical problems with luna's body here, but I like the image overall. Although, it would look better if you tried to add some light to the face or at least darken the lines. :3

[Hypereddie 56]

Looks pretty good, however, either the body width needs to be shorter or the body height needs to be taller (depends on the perspective of the image), as that is the only thing throwing off the perspective aspect of it.

 

It also looks like you tried to add some shading, I tried doing this with my drawings, but it looks strange when the only color is pencil. (There might be a way to do it correctly, but meh). The only advice I can give you about the shading is to keep it consistent throughout the drawing, so in this case the legs and body should also have some sort of shading to it as well.

 

But overall, looks nice!

Edited May 20, 2013 by Hypereddie

[Muse 6]

That looks pretty good. I like the idea of just using pencil. The only suggestion I have is maybe try to give her tail a little less angle and a little more flow.