RainbowShine 86 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 Well, this is my very first pony drawing, I'm looking for some feedback on what to improve on. And yes, I know, it's kinda... sideways ***I DID THIS IN PEN, PLEASE EXCUSE THE EXTRA LINES*** 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krys9 456 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 Hmm*Tilts head sideways* Well from looking at it I would say that it is spot-on with your avatar. Really nice work to be honest. 1 Signature made by me. "You thought you were there to guide me but you were only in my way." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NekromantiaFox 270 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 There are some very small problems, but that will all improve with time. Your much better than most of the people on this site already, so just keep practicing and you'll improve. 2 Deviantart: http://nekromantiafox.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonicrules831 520 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 I love it RainbowShine! Great work buddy I can't wait to see more Sport: It looks great Striker: Rainbow Shine! Anyway I love the drawing. Great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Moon 966 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 Bravo, really nice work. You did a lot better than me on my first attempt. The only things that I see that could be fixed are that the eyes are slightly small and one of the front legs is slightly derp. Very nice work though. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowShine 86 May 24, 2013 Author Share May 24, 2013 Hmm*Tilts head sideways* Well from looking at it I would say that it is spot-on with your avatar. Really nice work to be honest. Thanks! that's what I drew it off of in the first place so that's always good to hear There are some very small problems, but that will all improve with time. Your much better than most of the people on this site already, so just keep practicing and you'll improve. would you care to give me some examples on what I could do? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NekromantiaFox 270 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 would you care to give me some examples on what I could do? I'm a little busy with prints and commissions at the moment, but if you hit me up via message, I'm sure I can give you some pointers. Just make sure you post it there too. 1 Deviantart: http://nekromantiafox.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoripony 90 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 This is SUPER SUPER cute! I love your line work and don't worry about how you don't like them, it's all about that style~ The only thing I see wrong would be the eyes and they are a bit offset, but other than that, it's really good! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruddboy Olaf 10,628 May 24, 2013 Share May 24, 2013 (edited) Sorry nothing. Edited July 23, 2024 by Ruddboy Olaf 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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