Idea for a Fan-Fic

[~Rogue~ 193]

Hey Guys!

 

Now I write alot for english by making short stories and stuff but I haven't really made a Fan-Fic. I asked him and he loved the Idea. I think I need to change it a little. you guy's tell me what you think of the idea so far.

 

The Elements of Harmony are dead.

The Elements of Revolution must rise.

One pony, who will create the new meaning of law and order, shall represent the Element of Justice.

Another pony, who will rise again and show what Revolution can do, will represent the Element of Glory.

In addition, one pony shall give strength to the cause, never letting it die, never surrendering, as the Element of Swords.

Yet another pony will reach out to the fallen, letting them return to grace, via the power of the Element of Joy.*

Also, another pony will lurk in the shadows, waiting for the perfect moment, for all things to grow, they require time, hence, the Element of Time.*

Finally, one more pony shall unite the others, bringing an end to this reign of terror, under the Element of Hope!

 

[Quilava 1,290]

 I like the overall idea, not only can I see each other the Elements working well together, they can definitely be written in a way that at first they are separate ponies. Not knowing any of the others, but over time, find each other and *gasp* find out that their inner powers are the Elements that can end whatever is going on.

 

The only thing that I would think about changing would be the name for the third element. Instead of the Element of Swords, why not the Element of Chivalry? I think that suits more of the descriptive terms the elements tend to have. And maybe use grace in stead of joy. It would help to keep the overall theme of revolution using more descriptive terms.

 

 I really like this idea, I could also see it being a pretty damn good role-play if you get some avid people to participate.

[~Rogue~ 193]

 I like the overall idea, not only can I see each other the Elements working well together, they can definitely be written in a way that at first they are separate ponies. Not knowing any of the others, but over time, find each other and *gasp* find out that their inner powers are the Elements that can end whatever is going on.

 

The only thing that I would think about changing would be the name for the third element. Instead of the Element of Swords, why not the Element of Chivalry? I think that suits more of the descriptive terms the elements tend to have. And maybe use grace in stead of joy. It would help to keep the overall theme of revolution using more descriptive terms.

 

 I really like this idea, I could also see it being a pretty damn good role-play if you get some avid people to participate.

 

I know it would make an Awesome roleplay but I'm thinking more fan-fic. I knew the element of chivalry sounds good but it doesn't really suit the rest of the Elements as well as anything else I can think of. Swords is just there for now until I think of a better element. 

 

What do you think I should name the 3rd element?