The Crusade ends, Unfinished...

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I again made a sad drawing, i thought of Applebloom putting her cape in the fire because she just didn't want to dealt with failure, so she gave up on her passion and lives without her cutie mark...anyways now about the drawing, what do you think? comment, share, and Scale it from 1/10 and please, if you're going to brohoof, add a reply too thank you oh and the drawing isn't finished either forgot to say that

Edited June 2, 2013 by PelateOvercast

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If you are looking for a critique, Earl Hickey is the guy to do so. I have drawn my share of things and I believe I have some knowledge of perspective, shading, and what-not to give you a honest critique that may assist your artwork. Now let's get started shall we?

 

First off, I do like the idea of the artwork here and I do think you have the right way of going about it happening here as well. All the dark room, fireplace and Applebloom laying on the ground fit very nicely. Applebloom is drawn very well here and seems to be pulling of the right pose lying on the ground and all. But the other parts of the drawing don't seem to correspond with Applebloom's position and angle of the photo. 

The wood flooring suggests that you are looking straight down on Applebloom but the fireplace and couch don't agree with that statement. You drew the couch as you would look at it straight on with a upward angle and you drew the fireplace as it were taking a intense dive inward toward the picture. To fix this, I would suggest making the couch a top view instead of the straight on downward shot and to fix the fireplace, draw it as it were straight ahead and the three-dimensional space is contained with-in it instead of the angle it is at now.

 

I hope this gives you some help. Good work so far though, another tip would be intense shading. Shading always adds needed depth and curiosity to drawings you want to reflect a feel or certain emotion. 

Keep on keepin' on bud.

 

-Earl Hickey

[dedacct6 2,591]

If you are looking for a critique, Earl Hickey is the guy to do so. I have drawn my share of things and I believe I have some knowledge of perspective, shading, and what-not to give you a honest critique that may assist your artwork. Now let's get started shall we?

 

First off, I do like the idea of the artwork here and I do think you have the right way of going about it happening here as well. All the dark room, fireplace and Applebloom laying on the ground fit very nicely. Applebloom is drawn very well here and seems to be pulling of the right pose lying on the ground and all. But the other parts of the drawing don't seem to correspond with Applebloom's position and angle of the photo. 

The wood flooring suggests that you are looking straight down on Applebloom but the fireplace and couch don't agree with that statement. You drew the couch as you would look at it straight on with a upward angle and you drew the fireplace as it were taking a intense dive inward toward the picture. To fix this, I would suggest making the couch a top view instead of the straight on downward shot and to fix the fireplace, draw it as it were straight ahead and the three-dimensional space is contained with-in it instead of the angle it is at now.

 

I hope this gives you some help. Good work so far though, another tip would be intense shading. Shading always adds needed depth and curiosity to drawings you want to reflect a feel or certain emotion. 

Keep on keepin' on bud.

 

-Earl Hickey

yea i know i messed up on some stuff, i am going to add more to the drawing considering it isn't COMPLETELY done with the shading, i just got impatient and decided to finish it later, so thanks i will use that advice when i finish it