dash360 102 June 3, 2013 Share June 3, 2013 hello everypony, I just finished these three drawings. Criticise all you want. One is just a generic pony, one is Derpy, and the other is Babs Seeds (one of my favorite charaters). They are all kinda small, i think i do better that way. 4 Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PoniBroni 46 June 3, 2013 Share June 3, 2013 I think the one in the bottom right is your best. ^ ^ I like how you used shadow to emphasize how one leg is behind all the others on the top one. :3 The left one, eh... it is a bit 2D-ish for me... not a very technical criticism, sorry. >,<; 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
firekillerpwns 32 June 3, 2013 Share June 3, 2013 I think there all good but then again this is coming from the guy who tried to make a pony out of clay in art and it turned in a elephant dog thing 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proton 565 June 3, 2013 Share June 3, 2013 Derpy and Babs turned out very well, but... Well the generic pony doesn't look as good. Perhaps because its more 2D-ish than the others, but I could be wrong. Either way, the drawings are really above average, so keep going and I know you'll some day even get money from your art 1 "Walk always in shadows, so that you will see your foes before they see you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlogi 16 June 3, 2013 Share June 3, 2013 I think the one in the bottom right is your best. ^ ^ I like how you used shadow to emphasize how one leg is behind all the others on the top one. :3 The left one, eh... it is a bit 2D-ish for me... not a very technical criticism, sorry. >,<; i agree with him. its the best one out of all three and is the most evened out. the others have disproportionate sizes . but its definetly good. keep working at it!! Trust those who seek the truth, doubt those who say they've found it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dash360 102 June 3, 2013 Author Share June 3, 2013 Derpy and Babs turned out very well, but... Well the generic pony doesn't look as good. Perhaps because its more 2D-ish than the others, but I could be wrong. Either way, the drawings are really above average, so keep going and I know you'll some day even get money from your art I think the one in the bottom right is your best. ^ ^ I like how you used shadow to emphasize how one leg is behind all the others on the top one. :3 The left one, eh... it is a bit 2D-ish for me... not a very technical criticism, sorry. >,<; In the picture i kinda does bit on the paper the legs on the other side are more pronounced. I'll do better next time thank you. Im just one hell of a butler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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