Pelate Overcast *OC* re-done

[dedacct6 2,591]

 

 

 

 

Well, i finally did it, i remade Pelate *my OC* and way better than i expected so i hope you like it, and please tell me what you think, Reply, and criticize from a scale of 1/10

Edited June 6, 2013 by PelateOvercast

[Page.Turner 940]

For the character itself, it's quite good. But if you're looking for critique on the art I would give it a 4/10 because the shading is very off. Where you have the shadow of the pony facing one way, the shadows on the body go in a completely different direction which makes the light source kind of impossible o3o

 

But like I said, 10/10 for the character! it's not horribly over the top and it's not too plain either C:

[dedacct6 2,591]

For the character itself, it's quite good. But if you're looking for critique on the art I would give it a 4/10 because the shading is very off. Where you have the shadow of the pony facing one way, the shadows on the body go in a completely different direction which makes the light source kind of impossible o3o

 

But like I said, 10/10 for the character! it's not horribly over the top and it's not too plain either C:

Wait a minute... you're giving me a 4 out of 10 just because of one shading error? i made all the shading going in one direction, only the jaw going over the neck casts a little shadow, other than that i see nothing to make it go down that far, I'm just saying you went a little far with that rating. i mean you didn't say anything about the pony himself.

[Dopey Hooves 90]

I think that this is quite good. The shading looks great or even better amazing in my sense. But, I think it would of been better if you used color instead of just doing pencil. But, by far I think that it's amazing, I was blown away great job and keep up the epic work!

10/10

[dedacct6 2,591]

I think that this is quite good. The shading looks great or even better amazing in my sense. But, I think it would of been better if you used color instead of just doing pencil. But, by far I think that it's amazing, I was blown away great job and keep up the epic work!

10/10

ok ok ok...i like that your giving a 10/10 thanks, but i definitely think its not perfect. i do find problems myself in this drawing but thanks still

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Wait a minute... you're giving me a 4 out of 10 just because of one shading error? i made all the shading going in one direction, only the jaw going over the neck casts a little shadow, other than that i see nothing to make it go down that far, I'm just saying you went a little far with that rating. i mean you didn't say anything about the pony himself.

 

In the first picture, the shadowing isn't going all the same way. On the body, yes, but underneath with his actual shadow? It's not. And aside from that the lines are a little shaky, which goes away with practice of course.

 

And if you re-read my post, I commented about the actual pony TWICE. And rated you thusly on the pony and separately on the art. I gave you a 10/10 on the pony, 4/10 on the art.

[dedacct6 2,591]

In the first picture, the shadowing isn't going all the same way. On the body, yes, but underneath with his actual shadow? It's not. And aside from that the lines are a little shaky, which goes away with practice of course.

 

And if you re-read my post, I commented about the actual pony TWICE. And rated you thusly on the pony and separately on the art. I gave you a 10/10 on the pony, 4/10 on the art.

Well, though i disagree, *because that isn't what i meant*  whatever but anyways, i forgot to go over the light sketch lines so that's why it was so shaky, because I was in a rush to post.

Edited June 6, 2013 by PelateOvercast

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

Hmm, very fine craftsmanship on the pic, part of his left wing should be visible between back and neck though.

The design looks a bit generic though, maybe add a hat or somethin'.

6/10

[dedacct6 2,591]

Hmm, very fine craftsmanship on the pic, part of his left wing should be visible between back and neck though.

The design looks a bit generic though, maybe add a hat or somethin'.

6/10

Aw I'm so stupid!!!! I think ill add that in. cuz' now i cant un-see it and its bothering me. anyways, this was my first OC and also i wanted it to be simple unlike yours that probably you spent more time on designing. bu i'll see what i can do to make him a little more styled