Sparkshower 103 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 (edited) Alright, this challenge is to write a poem in the p.o.v. of your OC here are the rules 1 you must link you oc page 2 your poem must start with "There's a part of me that you don't see" 3 NO inapropro biz (keep it pg 13 people) 4 it CAN be happy if that makes you more comfortable. My oc; example: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sparkshower-meddlemane-r3588 There's a part of me that you don't see And a part I wish I couldn't It's stuck here inside of me And I have nowhere to put it It's evil and cruel and wants to break free And worst of all it's apart of me I can't cut it away and make it leave After all she is me How i wish she wouldn't be She's a monster and she's in my head Firequill, I want you dead You're everything I hate You've dirtied my clean slate Why can't I make you leave leave LEAVE Oh right because you're a part of me Edited June 15, 2013 by Sparkshower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clover Heart 978 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 Dang... I had a great idea for this, if it weren't for OC's. I don't have an OC page because I don't roleplay. Can I still participate in this challenge? You're the most basic of jokes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 Ok, I'm not gonna link my OC page, cause I forgot what I named it. Here's my poem anyways. Roses are blue, Violets are yellow. Fluttershy is as light as a feather. She's sweet and kind, and always speaks her mind. Even though she can be mild sometimes This fantastic signature is made my by awesome friend Rainbow Skywalker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparkshower 103 June 15, 2013 Author Share June 15, 2013 Ok, I'm not gonna link my OC page, cause I forgot what I named it. Here's my poem anyways. Roses are blue, Violets are yellow. Fluttershy is as light as a feather. She's sweet and kind, and always speaks her mind. Even though she can be mild sometimes Read the rules for the challenge before you post your submission please... There's a reason that they are there (sorry don't want to sound rude but I have to make the post long enough so I can post it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 Read the rules for the challenge before you post your submission please... There's a reason that they are there (sorry don't want to sound rude but I have to make the post long enough so I can post it) Ok, sorry. I forget, I will read next time. I don't really have a gift with poetry, I'll think of something in a couple of days and post it. This fantastic signature is made my by awesome friend Rainbow Skywalker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparkshower 103 June 15, 2013 Author Share June 15, 2013 (edited) Dang... I had a great idea for this, if it weren't for OC's. I don't have an OC page because I don't roleplay. Can I still participate in this challenge? Sure you can (also you can make an oc page even if you don't roleplay for like fanfics and stuff) I just put that as a reqirement so that if to understand the poem you have to understand the pony (like mine) you can just click on a link read and be able to understand the poem Ok, sorry. I forget, I will read next time. I don't really have a gift with poetry, I'll think of something in a couple of days and post it. Thank you and it's okay that you forgot (i do too sometime) I just wanted to make sure that you knew that there was more to the challenge than meets the eye XD Also if you forgot what you named your OC maybe check yur Content and look for it (if i's not too much trouble) Edited June 15, 2013 by Sparkshower 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Repsidy 35 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 There's a part of me that you don't see The darkness lying in my heart It wants to be free But I can not let it start the mayhem its caused before Memories of a Burnt world The broken glass on the floor Lune lying curled On what's left of the door She's just a part of me That many do not see As i hide myself away from thee For I am not to be. Haven't made an OC page for roleplaying or story writing for her but I do have the link to her back-story *that I think i need to improve* http://repsidy.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Lune-Ecarlate-Coloured-375144782 3 "HELP! I'm trapped in my mind again!!! If you ever see A picture made by me, Please critique it! I'd love to know what everyone thinks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Moon 965 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 Fine...I'll try to write some poetry. Here, have a link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dark-moon-r3621 This used to be his p o v There's a part of me that you don't see It hides elusively behind these cold blue eyes A part that lies at the very core of me It will always be hidden behind this disguise The part that cares and wants to belong The part that loves and wants to be free The part that feels and wants to be strong The part that cries and wants to be me It tries so hard to escape, but the wall is complete The wall is impenetrable and knows no defeat All that is left is to give up and be glum All that is left is to give up and be numb 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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