Pony Poetry Challenge

[Sparkshower 103]

Alright, this challenge is to write a poem in the p.o.v. of your OC 

here are the rules 

1 you must link you oc page 

2 your poem must start with "There's a part of me that you don't see" 

3 NO inapropro biz (keep it pg 13

 people)

4 it CAN be happy if that makes you more comfortable.

My oc; example:

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sparkshower-meddlemane-r3588

 

 There's a part of me that you don't see

 And a part I wish I couldn't

 It's stuck here inside of me

 And I have nowhere to put it

 It's evil and cruel and wants to break free

 And worst of all it's apart of me

 I can't cut it away and make it leave

 After all she is me

 How i wish she wouldn't be

 She's a monster and she's in my head

 Firequill, I want you dead

 You're everything I hate 

 You've dirtied my clean slate 

 Why can't I make you leave leave LEAVE

 Oh right because you're a part of me

Edited June 15, 2013 by Sparkshower

[Clover Heart 978]

Dang... I had a great idea for this, if it weren't for OC's.

 

I don't have an OC page because I don't roleplay. Can I still participate in this challenge?

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

Ok, I'm not gonna link my OC page, cause I forgot what I named it. Here's my poem anyways.

 

Roses are blue, Violets are yellow.

 

Fluttershy is as light as a feather.

 

She's sweet and kind, and always speaks her mind.

 

Even though she can be mild sometimes

[Sparkshower 103]

Ok, I'm not gonna link my OC page, cause I forgot what I named it. Here's my poem anyways.

 

Roses are blue, Violets are yellow.

 

Fluttershy is as light as a feather.

 

She's sweet and kind, and always speaks her mind.

 

Even though she can be mild sometimes

Read the rules for the challenge before you post your submission please...

There's a reason that they are there

(sorry don't want to sound rude but I have to make the post long enough so I can post it)

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

Read the rules for the challenge before you post your submission please...

There's a reason that they are there

(sorry don't want to sound rude but I have to make the post long enough so I can post it)

Ok, sorry. I forget, I will read next time. I don't really have a gift with poetry, I'll think of something in a couple of days and post it.

[Sparkshower 103]

 

Dang... I had a great idea for this, if it weren't for OC's.

 

I don't have an OC page because I don't roleplay. Can I still participate in this challenge?

 

Sure you can (also you can make an oc page even if you don't roleplay for like fanfics and stuff) I just put that as a reqirement so that if to understand the poem you have to understand the pony (like mine) you can just click on a link read and be able to understand the poem 

Ok, sorry. I forget, I will read next time. I don't really have a gift with poetry, I'll think of something in a couple of days and post it.

Thank you and it's okay that you forgot (i do too sometime) I just wanted to make sure that you knew that there was more to the challenge than meets the eye XD Also if you forgot what you named your OC maybe check yur Content and look for it (if i's not too much trouble)

Edited June 15, 2013 by Sparkshower

[Repsidy 35]

There's a part of me that you don't see

The darkness lying in my heart

It wants to be free

But I can not let it start

 

the mayhem its caused before

Memories of a Burnt world

The broken glass on the floor

Lune lying curled

On what's left of the door

 

She's just a part of me

That many do not see

As i hide myself away from thee

For I am not to be.

 

 

 

 

Haven't made an OC page for roleplaying or story writing for her but I do have the link to her back-story *that I think i need to improve* 

 

http://repsidy.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Lune-Ecarlate-Coloured-375144782

[Dark Moon 965]

Fine...I'll try to write some poetry.

Here, have a link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dark-moon-r3621

This used to be his p o v

 

There's a part of me that you don't see

It hides elusively behind these cold blue eyes

A part that lies at the very core of me

It will always be hidden behind this disguise

The part that cares and wants to belong

The part that loves and wants to be free

The part that feels and wants to be strong

The part that cries and wants to be me

It tries so hard to escape, but the wall is complete

The wall is impenetrable and knows no defeat

All that is left is to give up and be glum

All that is left is to give up and be numb