Chaos Within My Mind (New Song)

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,983]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6i7qpNT5GM&feature=youtu.be

 

A sequel to Emoverephobia (and to a lesser extent Anxiety), this song is a bit more experimental. It focuses on Kyoshi's constant stress that he feels within his mind. Much of it is a personal battle though. A battle that he has always been fighting, and losing.

 

 

 

 

[repsol rave 2,963]

HOLY SHIFZ! i didn't know you where a part of this forum! i consider myself a big fan of your work, and this one is amazing! keep it up bro!

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,983]

HOLY SHIFZ! i didn't know you where a part of this forum! i consider myself a big fan of your work, and this one is amazing! keep it up bro!

Wow, I had no idea I had any big fans. I am trying to get back into a nice 'groove' when it comes to making songs. I really think this one is a good start.

 

I am glad that you enjoy my work though. It means a lot.

[Friendship_Cannon 1,676]

That is quite awesome, man!

A lot of feelings in this, and just a beautiful tune, easy but going deep I´d say.

Subbed and liked, keep up the good work!

[Satsuki Kiryuin 1,155]

I think it's pretty good, it could do with some added layers on the melody, and piano(?) parts, to make it sound less empty. I also think that you should work a little on your volume control, since the synth largely overpowers the piano(?). The beat could be a bit better, maybe add a kick? Other than that, it's a nice track, good job.^^

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,983]

I think it's pretty good, it could do with some added layers on the melody, and piano(?) parts, to make it sound less empty. I also think that you should work a little on your volume control, since the synth largely overpowers the piano(?). The beat could be a bit better, maybe add a kick? Other than that, it's a nice track, good job.^^

I agree with you on these things. It does sound a bit...bland, in certain areas. In terms of the beat, there actually is a kick, I think I made it a bit too quiet though.

 

I know my music is not all that great (in my opinion), but I guess I am not really aiming for that at this point. I just aim for an emotion, or a specific sound. If I can hit that and still make it sound good, then I did a decent job at least.

 

I thank you for the compliment and advice.

[Satsuki Kiryuin 1,155]

I agree with you on these things. It does sound a bit...bland, in certain areas. In terms of the beat, there actually is a kick, I think I made it a bit too quiet though.

 

I know my music is not all that great (in my opinion), but I guess I am not really aiming for that at this point. I just aim for an emotion, or a specific sound. If I can hit that and still make it sound good, then I did a decent job at least.

 

I thank you for the compliment and advice.

I recommend you sidechain your synths to the kick so that the kick will be louder, I'm glad you appreciate the critique, I enjoy helping. ^^