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By NocturnalRainbow, User
June 15, 2013

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June 15, 2013 (edited)

So I've been writing a fanfic for about a month and have 4 chapters written and published. I just cannot figure out what to do in chapter 5! Can someone read it and give me some ideas. (and critique it while your at it) It is a Sad Fic btw. If you hate sad fics this is not for you.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104681/deeper-than-what-appears

Grammatical Error in the title of this post. I must fix! I'M

Edited July 26, 2013 by NocturnalRainbow

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