Rainbow whiplash

[Onylex 2,837]

Hey there everypony this is my first Octavia's Hall tread/post and I just wanted to see what you all think of my rainbow dash. Its not finished though, Im sort of stuck on what color I should make her outfit. Im also looking for suggestions on the outfit color as well as some constructive criticism toward the drawing. Im always looking to sharpen and improve my artistic skills.

 

 

[Prince Chase 11]

I honestly think it looks really cool not just because I love Rainbow Dash but to see someone draw her like that but I do think the color you should use is maybe red and starts to fade into green but those are my suggestions.

[cd_solidsnake 122]

I do have one suggestion: her legs are really pumped. Make her go less to the gym next time :3 (is she friends with Chun-Li from Street Fighter? That'd explain it all).

[Onylex 2,837]

I honestly think it looks really cool not just because I love Rainbow Dash but to see someone draw her like that but I do think the color you should use is maybe red and starts to fade into green but those are my suggestions.

I like that I Idea but, do you mean the stars are going to be red and fade into green or the outfit will be red and fade into green with white stars?

I do have one suggestion: her legs are really pumped. Make her go less to the gym next time :3 (is she friends with Chun-Li from Street Fighter? That'd explain it all).

 lol Yeah I guess it does look like shes been working out doesn't it XD. I tried making her look seductive like a succubus. Thank you for your input though I'll take it into consideration.

[OneTrickPony 64]

I stink at art I'm more fanfiction and short story's that have no meaning and i don't notice things very well that's why I something's say and went to the grocery store, so all I can say is good job and keep up the good work

 

Oh and her ears are a little pointy I mean the look really stiff those ears, Also I think that is close to the right color for her eyes but her eyes are a little more violet not purple just saying

[Prince Chase 11]

I like that I Idea but, do you mean the stars are going to be red and fade into green or the outfit will be red and fade into green with white stars?

 

lol Yeah I guess it does look like shes been working out doesn't it XD. I tried making her look seductive like a succubus. Thank you for your input though I'll take it into consideration.

What I mean is what you have already stated which is that her dress is red then fades into green with white stars. So yea I know what you mean by that and im grateful you pointed it out that I wasn't to specific about the dress.