Vermillion 613 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 if you didnt know my favorite pony is Octavia she is also my favorite pony to draw as well so here is Octavia playing her cello please tell me what you think ...critics please 3 Satan is good, Satan is my pal i have nothing else to say... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Moon 6,341 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 Well, as for the bass, it was drawn well, and had nice shading. Octavia had some pretty nice shading as well, but the proportions were a bit off. Keep practicing with proportions until you can get them just right. The lines are a bit shaky as well, but good job with shading, and the mane has a nice style to it. Autumn Blue Moon Clear Skies Summer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vermillion 613 July 17, 2013 Author Share July 17, 2013 Well, as for the bass, it was drawn well, and had nice shading. Octavia had some pretty nice shading as well, but the proportions were a bit off. Keep practicing with proportions until you can get them just right. The lines are a bit shaky as well, but good job with shading, and the mane has a nice style to it. thank you when you say proportions can you go into a bit more detail like the proportions of what part, would be much more help full Satan is good, Satan is my pal i have nothing else to say... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Moon 6,341 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 thank you when you say proportions can you go into a bit more detail like the proportions of what part, would be much more help full Well, when I say proportions, in specific; I mean mostly the chest and head area. The chest is a bit too pointy, and the head is a bit too small for the mane and body. The face feels a bit squished up together as well. Hope I could help. 2 Autumn Blue Moon Clear Skies Summer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vermillion 613 July 17, 2013 Author Share July 17, 2013 Well, when I say proportions, in specific; I mean mostly the chest and head area. The chest is a bit too pointy, and the head is a bit too small for the mane and body. The face feels a bit squished up together as well. Hope I could help. ok thanks you did help but i have to say the mane is just messed up from extreme cello playing and i did the face because i had to leave oh and thanks for the advice /) 1 Satan is good, Satan is my pal i have nothing else to say... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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