open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Because i knew that underneath that bitch was a beautiful, loving mare, and a fantastic mother." Thunder smiled at Charcoal. "I gave you a chance, and it's the best decision i've ever made." Thunder looked at Charcoal, leaning in for a kiss.

 

((yeah... it's up to you... characters.))

Charcoal leans in and kisses him back once they break Charcoal says: "So you are saying from nearly the moment you meet me you wanted to have a foal with me? Little bit creepy if you ask me. But I'm glad you gave me a chance, and I'm glad I accepted."

 

((OOC: Have you noticed that on the Charcoal-Thunder side of the RP there is almost no action but more romance. And on the Rock-Sarah side there is more action. Seems we are choosing sides.))

Edited August 12, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"No no no no no no no, not a foal, i just wanted to be with you, and the foal was just a big surprise, a happy one." Thunder smiles.
 

((OOC: You've got yourself a point there, this story split itself into two stories, however, i'm sure there will be a meeting up again, sometime..))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"No no no no no no no, not a foal, i just wanted to be with you, and the foal was just a big surprise, a happy one." Thunder smiles.

 

((OOC: You've got yourself a point there, this story split itself into two stories, however, i'm sure there will be a meeting up again, sometime..))

Charcoal smiles deviously. "Then what was with the part about me looking like a good mother when we first meet? That is not exactly something you can tell about somepony just by watching them for a few minutes. Unless... there is a specific reason for you seeing that."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"Okay, you got me. I wanted a foal. Is that so bad? Having fatherly feelings of wanting to have a foal to love?" Thunder then asked Charcoal. He took another sip of his coffee. It was near cold now. Thunder looked out of the window, avoiding eye contact with Charcoal.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Okay, you got me. I wanted a foal. Is that so bad? Having fatherly feelings of wanting to have a foal to love?" Thunder then asked Charcoal. He took another sip of his coffee. It was near cold now. Thunder looked out of the window, avoiding eye contact with Charcoal.

"Hey come on don't be that way. We are together now, and you have a beautiful foal of your own." Snuggling up close to him Charcoal tries to get some sort of reaction. "Please don't be mad at me Thunder."

 

((OOC: I would actually like it if the two stories would come together.))

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"Oh, i'm not mad at you, i can't be, even if i really wanted to" Thunder leaned on to Charcoal. "It's just that..." Thunder stopped for a brief second. "When i was in the orphanage the other foals made fun of me, saying i'd never get a marefriend and such, and now, i've gote one, i"m not sure if i do it right, i have no experience." 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Oh, i'm not mad at you, i can't be, even if i really wanted to" Thunder leaned on to Charcoal. "It's just that..." Thunder stopped for a brief second. "When i was in the orphanage the other foals made fun of me, saying i'd never get a marefriend and such, and now, i've gote one, i"m not sure if i do it right, i have no experience."

"And what makes you think that any of those foals had any more experience than you did with their first marefriend if they ever had one? Just like a newborn foal, everypony is a blankflank when it comes to relationships. And the only way to fix that is to love the one you are with. Just like we do. You are a wonderful stallion Thunder, and you are doing just fine in my book."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"Thank you Charcoal... I love you." Thunder snuggled up to Charcoal. Thunder aand Charcoal sat down for mere minutes. "How was your foalhood" Thunder asked out of the blue. "You know, we've never really talked about it or anything, and i'd like to know." 1234567

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Thank you Charcoal... I love you." Thunder snuggled up to Charcoal. Thunder aand Charcoal sat down for mere minutes. "How was your foalhood" Thunder asked out of the blue. "You know, we've never really talked about it or anything, and i'd like to know." 1234567

At Thunders question Charcoals expression darkens a bit. "My foalhood was... bad. When I lived with my parents they didn't get along and would usually take it out on me. After taking it for a while I had decided to run away from home. Since I couldn't fly because of my wing condition I had to take a balloon out of cloudsdale." It was about now that Charcoal started crying. "While ridding in the balloon the bottom collapsed and I fell. I'm not sure when I woke up but when I did I just started to limp and see where it would take me. Eventually I made it to ponyville where another filly found me and brought me to the nearest hospital. After getting out I had found a random spot where I started to build a house. After many hours I had finished it and that is where I lived untill my parents tracked me down and brought me back home. Once there I was forced to stay till I was old enough to move out on my own." At that point Charcoal was blubbering.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"Oh, i'm sorry to hear that. Maybe i shouldn't've asked that. I'm sorry." Thunder hugged Charcoal tightly and let her cry out on his shoulder. "You don't have to worry about that all now. I'm here with you." Thunder said in a calm voice. "I'll always be here for you." 123

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Oh, i'm sorry to hear that. Maybe i shouldn't've asked that. I'm sorry." Thunder hugged Charcoal tightly and let her cry out on his shoulder. "You don't have to worry about that all now. I'm here with you." Thunder said in a calm voice. "I'll always be here for you." 123

After crying for a few minutes Charcoal calms down enough to talk again. "I-it's ok Thunder, I'll be alright. You would have asked eventually anyway." Charcoal then breaks away from the hug. "Now if you don't mind, I would like to go on a short walk by myself for a little bit."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"Alright, just... be careful please."Thunder said, drinking the last of his now cold coffee. He went back to the couch and sat down on it, staring forwards with a blank stare until he fell asleep, still sitting on the couch. 

 

((OOC Now that i'm thinking about it, i hope Sarah and Rock, if they escape, run towards Valkyrie and somehow find Thunder and Charcoal.))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Alright, just... be careful please."Thunder said, drinking the last of his now cold coffee. He went back to the couch and sat down on it, staring forwards with a blank stare until he fell asleep, still sitting on the couch.

 

((OOC Now that i'm thinking about it, i hope Sarah and Rock, if they escape, run towards Valkyrie and somehow find Thunder and Charcoal.))

"Thank you. I'll be back soon, love you." Walking towards the door Charcoal grabs her coat and hat and walk out the door. After a few minutes of walking the storm gets much worse so she decides to turn back. As she is walking home there was a loud bang and everything goes white.

A few minutes later Thunder is tried to be reached on the phone.

 

((OOC: I hope that as well.))

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

Thunder woke up to the ringing. "Yeah yeah, i'm coming." He opened the door to see nopony's there. "huh... Oh, it's the phone. Thunder took the phone and said "Hello, this is Farts and Ember's pleasure palace, Thunder speaking." Thunder listened to what the pony on the phone had to say.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

 

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

Thunder woke up to the ringing. "Yeah yeah, i'm coming." He opened the door to see nopony's there. "huh... Oh, it's the phone. Thunder took the phone and said "Hello, this is Farts and Ember's pleasure palace, Thunder speaking." Thunder listened to what the pony on the phone had to say.

"Hello there. We are calling to tell you that Miss Charcoal Embers was brought down to the hospital just a few minutes ago. It appears that she was struck by lightning during the storm and was found and brought down here. That is all thank you. *hangs up*

 

((OOC: Farts residence. Ok now that is funny.))

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

Thunder hung up with a blank expression on his face. "John, watch after Arrow, Arrow, watch after Lightning. I'm going out." Thunder didn't put his coat nor hat on. He just ran out of the door and on to the street. As much as it hurt him he flew to the hospital, his wings still thorn up form a couple of days ago. He arrived at the hospital and a nurse took him to Charcoal. "Charcoal, honey, what happened?" Thunder said, tears in his eyes while holding Charcoal's hoof.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

Thunder hung up with a blank expression on his face. "John, watch after Arrow, Arrow, watch after Lightning. I'm going out." Thunder didn't put his coat nor hat on. He just ran out of the door and on to the street. As much as it hurt him he flew to the hospital, his wings still thorn up form a couple of days ago. He arrived at the hospital and a nurse took him to Charcoal. "Charcoal, honey, what happened?" Thunder said, tears in his eyes while holding Charcoal's hoof.

((OOC:And now time for the drama.))

Charcoal just looks at the stallion with a strange expression. Taking her hoof away from him all she does is stare. "Um I'm sorry but who are you? I've never seen you before in my life. So how do you know my name and why are you calling me honey?"

 

((OOC: I probably deserve dick of the month award for this.))

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

((OOC: Yeah... you do.

 

))

 

Thunder had eyes appearing in his eyes. He asked a nurse if she'll be alright, if she would get her memory back "I don't know" is all he got back. he turned to Charcoal, "I am Thunder Farts, your coltfriend. We live in a house together and we have a foal. Please, please get your memory back." Thunder was crying in front of Charcoal.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

((OOC: Yeah... you do.

))

 

Thunder had eyes appearing in his eyes. He asked a nurse if she'll be alright, if she would get her memory back "I don't know" is all he got back. he turned to Charcoal, "I am Thunder Farts, your coltfriend. We live in a house together and we have a foal. Please, please get your memory back." Thunder was crying in front of Charcoal.

"I'm sorry sir." Said Charcoal starting to get a bit freaked out by this. "But I don't know anypony named Thunder Farts, I think I would remember a funny last name like that." She said while chuckling a little. "And I think having a foal would be hard to forget as well."

 

((OOC: Yes yes, thank you all for this wonderful award. I would like to thank the academy.))

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

Thunder sat down on a nearby chair. Crying. 

 

With his face in his hooves he sat next to Charcoal.

 

"There must be something you remember. Something, anything. How we met, the night in the motel, the birth of Lightning. Please baby, don't do this to me baby, please don't"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

Thunder sat down on a nearby chair. Crying.

 

With his face in his hooves he sat next to Charcoal.

 

"There must be something you remember. Something, anything. How we met, the night in the motel, the birth of Lightning. Please baby, don't do this to me baby, please don't"

"Look can you stop calling me baby? I don't even know who you are mister. What I do know is that I need to get back to work at my shop soon. Somepony has to make the weapons and armour for the guards at the fort. And somepony has to make money off of it."

 

((OOC: Why can't I stop smiling?))

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"The fort? WHAT FORT!?" Thunder thumped his front hooves next to Charcoals shouders. He had an angry look on his face. "TELL ME, TELL ME NOW!" Thunder was crying and furious at the same time while bending over Charcoal. 

 

(( You stupid motherfucker i'm gonna hit you IRL))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"The fort? WHAT FORT!?" Thunder thumped his front hooves next to Charcoals shouders. He had an angry look on his face. "TELL ME, TELL ME NOW!" Thunder was crying and furious at the same time while bending over Charcoal.

 

(( You stupid motherfucker i'm gonna hit you IRL))

"Hey get the fuck away from me!" Charcoal screams as she punches Thunder in the face. "And I mean Bavik fort of course. Where else would I be talking about? Isn't this where I am? Why are you asking such a silly question like that it should be obvious." 123456

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"YOU ARE NOT GOING TO WORK AT BAVIK FORT!" Thunder yelled, ignoring the hit in his face, even though his nose was bleeding. He picked up a nearby phone and called.

Not much later what semmed like an army of ponies in blak suits came towards the hotel and took Charcoal.

They left her in the hospital bed, but drove that somewhere else.

The place was dark and wet, and had a foul smell. 

"I'm sorry you have to be here, but untill we get your memory back we'll have to keep you here." 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"YOU ARE NOT GOING TO WORK AT BAVIK FORT!" Thunder yelled, ignoring the hit in his face, even though his nose was bleeding. He picked up a nearby phone and called.

Not much later what semmed like an army of ponies in blak suits came towards the hotel and took Charcoal.

They left her in the hospital bed, but drove that somewhere else.

The place was dark and wet, and had a foul smell.

"I'm sorry you have to be here, but untill we get your memory back we'll have to keep you here."

"What the fuck kind of pony are you just kidnapping random ponies? I'm nit going to stay here move out of the way, I've got work to do that isn't kidnapping." Charcoal tries to walk away but is blocked by the same large ponies in black suits that took her. "Mind getting out of my way?"