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Thunder walked over to Caprisha and gave her a kiss on her cheek. His mouth was red again of Caprisha's blood. Then he went to the other dide of the bed, laying himself next to where Caprisha was sleeping, her side was full of her blood shile Thunders side was still clean.

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Thunder walked over to Caprisha and gave her a kiss on her cheek. His mouth was red again of Caprisha's blood. Then he went to the other dide of the bed, laying himself next to where Caprisha was sleeping, her side was full of her blood shile Thunders side was still clean.

Caprisha felt calm with Thunder at her side. She closer her eyes and tried to sleep once more. She eventually did and found herself in a horrible nightmare. She dreamed that she had been tied up and somepony used a chisel to break her horn off of her head.

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Thunder saw Caprisha sweating in her sleep, she was obviously having a nightmare. He decided to shake Caprisha loose from her dream and tried to have her wake up. Shaking her back and forth he splattered blood all over the beds in the hotel roomgf.

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Thunder saw Caprisha sweating in her sleep, she was obviously having a nightmare. He decided to shake Caprisha loose from her dream and tried to have her wake up. Shaking her back and forth he splattered blood all over the beds in the hotel roomgf.

Caprisha felt something was off about the ponies who were removing her horn. They looked all wavy and distorted. And she was feeling tired, which was probably because of how much blood she was losing. She just wished this torture would end and she could go.

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Thunder saw that Caprisha wasn't waking up, he started to worry. "Caprisha! Wake up!" He yelled, splatters of blood flying across to Caprisha's face. He layed his head on Caprisha's blood-covered chest to hear if her heart was still beating, her chest was warm.

 

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Thunder saw that Caprisha wasn't waking up, he started to worry. "Caprisha! Wake up!" He yelled, splatters of blood flying across to Caprisha's face. He layed his head on Caprisha's blood-covered chest to hear if her heart was still beating, her chest was warm.

 

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Caprisha felt it as everything seemed to shake, but that did little to her, everypony who wanted to do bad things to her didn't even seem to notice the shaking. She was losing a lot of blood, too much of it. She needed medical attention before it was to late, though she wasn't going to get it, no one here seemed like they wanted to help her.

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Thunder stopped shaking Caprisha and started to cry on Caprisha's chest. His tears flowed down her shoulders onto the bed. "Please Caprisha, wake up, you can't sleep now." Thunder said, lifting his head to look at Caprisha. "I'll make sure you'll be okay, we'll go to an hospital or something." Thunder stood up and reached for the phone calling the hospital.

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Thunder stopped shaking Caprisha and started to cry on Caprisha's chest. His tears flowed down her shoulders onto the bed. "Please Caprisha, wake up, you can't sleep now." Thunder said, lifting his head to look at Caprisha. "I'll make sure you'll be okay, we'll go to an hospital or something." Thunder stood up and reached for the phone calling the hospital.

The disturbances began to stop. Now it was just her and her captors. They began to use some of their many tools on her. They used drills on her shoulders and they hammered spikes into her legs. Then they clips some cables to the spikes and began filling her body with electricity. Outside of her dream her heart rate was beginning to pick up, whick was causing her to bleed out faster.

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After Thunder had called for an ambulance he returned to Caprisha, who was bleeding even worse now. "Please Caprisha, hang in there. They are on their way here and they'll help you." Thunder said, still trying to wake Caprisha from her sleep. Tears were dripping onto her chest.

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After Thunder had called for an ambulance he returned to Caprisha, who was bleeding even worse now. "Please Caprisha, hang in there. They are on their way here and they'll help you." Thunder said, still trying to wake Caprisha from her sleep. Tears were dripping onto her chest.

The disturbances had returned but Caprisha was too busy being electricuted. After a few minutes of this they eventually stopped. They had taken her horn and tortured her, what else could they do? Her question was answered when they brought a sawblade out and aimed it directly over her chest.

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Thunder opened the door as two ponies came in and took Caprisha. They brought her to the ambulance and Thunder sat next to her. He looked at Caprisha's lifeless body as she lied next to him in the ambulance, which was driving to the hospital with the loud sirens on.

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Thunder opened the door as two ponies came in and took Caprisha. They brought her to the ambulance and Thunder sat next to her. He looked at Caprisha's lifeless body as she lied next to him in the ambulance, which was driving to the hospital with the loud sirens on.

Caprisha though she heard something loud in the background, but it was drained out by the sound of the blade starting up. It was slowly lowered until it began cutting her open and was slowly dragged down until it was just below her stomach. Then they opened up the hole they just made and began to smile.

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The ponies from the ambulance rushed Caprisha to the hospitaland layed her in a free bed. "We'll just have to wait for her to wake up." One of them said. Thunder decided to close his eyes and get some sleep as he waited in a chair for Caprisha to wake upup.

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The ponies from the ambulance rushed Caprisha to the hospitaland layed her in a free bed. "We'll just have to wait for her to wake up." One of them said. Thunder decided to close his eyes and get some sleep as he waited in a chair for Caprisha to wake upup.

Caprisha felt strange. The ponies were taking her guts out right now but something was off. And her captors seemed to be getting further away. Next thing she knew she was hearing the sound of slow beeping. She opened her eyes slowly, she saw many blurry images but nothing really clear. "Ah, welcome back to the living." The doctor joked. He turned and told a nurse to go wake up Thunder.

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As Thunder was woken by a nurse he looked at Caprisha, smiling that she was finally awake. He got up from the chair and walked over to her. He kissed her on the forehead, which was now not anymore covered in blood. "I love you Caprisha." Thunder said, happily.

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As Thunder was woken by a nurse he looked at Caprisha, smiling that she was finally awake. He got up from the chair and walked over to her. He kissed her on the forehead, which was now not anymore covered in blood. "I love you Caprisha." Thunder said, happily.

Caprisha smiled but nothing more. She felt like crap right now and didn't really feel like doing anything, she felt physically tired. Though that didn't keep her from looking around. It seemed the beeping was from a heart monitor. And she seemed to be hooked up to many different things, most of which seemed to be pumping different things into her. The doctor walked up to the both of them. "Don't worry, she will make a full recovery. It just seems to be major blood loss and nothing more." The doctor said.

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"Alright then, but what will happen to her when she does recover though?" Thunder asked the doctor. "I mean, she's been living with a horn for her entire life, i don't think she could do much without it." Thunder looked at the doctor as he went back to sitting in that chair.

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"Alright then, but what will happen to her when she does recover though?" Thunder asked the doctor. "I mean, she's been living with a horn for her entire life, i don't think she could do much without it." Thunder looked at the doctor as he went back to sitting in that chair.

"Well, thankfully that should only be a temporary problem." The doctor says as he looked at Caprisha's stub of a horn. "I'm not sure if you know this but the horn is a bone connected directly to the brain of unicorns. Before, when the princesses still ruled, unicorns would go in for annual horn filing. Though not every unicorns studies history like I did. The horn should grow back after a while. For now she will only have to deal with using very weak spells."

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"I'm curious about how you're gonna try and tell her that without her going all kinds of crazy. I'm not sure if i even could fucking take it." Thunder looked at the bruises on his legs. His wings hurt from carrrying ponies around. The wound in his chest began hurting again too.

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"I'm curious about how you're gonna try and tell her that without her going all kinds of crazy. I'm not sure if i even could fucking take it." Thunder looked at the bruises on his legs. His wings hurt from carrrying ponies around. The wound in his chest began hurting again too.

The doctor thought for a moment. "Well, if you have ever broken you wings it can be compared to than in a way." The doctor says. "Oh and I'm not going to tell her, you are. I'm not paid enough to be able to afford to try and calm down a unicorn who had just lost a part of herself. Plus from how she reacts to you I would imagine you might be better for giving her bad news."

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"Yeah, i guess you're right. I should tell her, not you. Not anypony else. I just hope she'll accept it quickly. Damn, life's a bitch, giving one second, taking the next. Thunder walked up to Caprisha and saton her bed. "Hey Prish, how are you feeling?" He asked.

 

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"Yeah, i guess you're right. I should tell her, not you. Not anypony else. I just hope she'll accept it quickly. Damn, life's a bitch, giving one second, taking the next. Thunder walked up to Caprisha and saton her bed. "Hey Prish, how are you feeling?" He asked.

 

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Caprisha looked at Thunder with a smile. She now found the energy to sit up and talk to him. "I feel like shit, but not terrible I guess." Caprisha said. She still hadn't noticed the large bandage around her head, so was still unaware of her missing horn. "Had a pretty bad dream but it could be worse."

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Thunder kissed her on her forehead, just beneath the bandage and sat down on the bed. He sighed. "Caprisha-" he stopped for a little bit. "-you won't be able to do magic anymore, i'm afraid." Thunder said, trying to force a smile on his face, which didn't looked like it worked.

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Thunder kissed her on her forehead, just beneath the bandage and sat down on the bed. He sighed. "Caprisha-" he stopped for a little bit. "-you won't be able to do magic anymore, i'm afraid." Thunder said, trying to force a smile on his face, which didn't looked like it worked.

Caprisha's eyes go wide with surprise and confusion. "Wait, why do you say that..." She stopped herself. She slowly raised her hoof to her head. She begins feeling around for her horn, but only finds a stub. She is silent for a few second, then tears start to form in here eyes.

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"I'm sorry Caprisha. I couldn't stop them. If i would've been fucking sooner i could." Thunder said, getting up from the bed, kicking a chair to the side. "But i wasn't and now you lost your horn. It's my fucking fault, i should've been quicker." Thunder said, sobbing.

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