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They brought down Charcoal after they took her to Jason. and they threw her into the same cell the dead John was in.

 

Francis looked at Charcoal. "You will die down here." He smiled. Francis sent 2 guards in and they took her armor. Then they pulled out the dead body and went to go dispose it.

 

Francis looked at Sarah. "You're Pregnant aren't you?" Francis said.

 

"Yes. Why do you care?" she snared.

"We almost should kill you." Francis said.

"Why!!" Sarah proclaimed.

Francis sighed with relief.

"Because I don't want you to have a kid with this mock off." Francis stated.

 

Francis looked at Rock. "If I get clearance. I will kill her." "And you will watch it happen." Francis said.

 

They finished and walked up the stairs and closed the door.

 

Sarah looked at her stomach. where the thought of having the child hit her mind.

"Rock..." She cried.. "I don't want to lose your baby." "AppleJack needs to hurry!!" She said crying.

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They brought down Charcoal after they took her to Jason. and they threw her into the same cell the dead John was in.

 

Francis looked at Charcoal. "You will die down here." He smiled. Francis sent 2 guards in and they took her armor. Then they pulled out the dead body and went to go dispose it.

 

Francis looked at Sarah. "You're Pregnant aren't you?" Francis said.

 

"Yes. Why do you care?" she snared.

"We almost should kill you." Francis said.

"Why!!" Sarah proclaimed.

Francis sighed with relief.

"Because I don't want you to have a kid with this mock off." Francis stated.

 

Francis looked at Rock. "If I get clearance. I will kill her." "And you will watch it happen." Francis said.

 

They finished and walked up the stairs and closed the door.

 

Sarah looked at her stomach. where the thought of having the child hit her mind.

"Rock..." She cried.. "I don't want to lose your baby." "AppleJack needs to hurry!!" She said crying.

 

 

"Life is only worth worrying about if you have a reason to live. Kill me if you want, but why is it you want to kill those two? If you hurt either one of those two I swear I will hunt you till the ends of the earth! You hear me?! I will get you, one way or another, I will get you."

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"Well, at least we now have a common enemy" Rock shrugged

 

He turned to Sarah "I won't let them do anything to you" He hugged her

 

He then turned to Charcoal "We've got a plan to get out here. Help is on it's way soon, and the more ponies that help out, the better. Are you with us?"


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2 Hours Later

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All three ponies heard the door open then close.

Gavin came down the stairs Gavin's facial expression said it all.

 

"I..I'm sorry Rock.." Gavin said.

Gavin opened the cell. He looked sad. He grabbed Sarah and took her out of the cell.

"Hey let go!!" Sarah said.

 

"Jason's asked to see Sarah." Gavin said.

"He's going to tourcher you for being pregnant." I-I..." Gavin tried to speak, but nothing came out. He took Sarah upstairs.

 

After some time they could hear Sarah screaming. They could hear her balling.

"Please stop!!" She screamed you could hear the crying in her voice.

"Pleeeease!!!" She cried.

"Then tell us what you know." Jason Lark said.

"Noooo!" She cried.

"Double the voltige Gavin." Jason Lark.

"Enough is enough Sir!" Gavin said.

"Do it now!" Jason Lark screamed.

"Ahhhhhh!!" Sarah screamed.

 

This went on for an hour.

Gavin finally brought Sarah back down with a Guard. Gavin laid Sarah down gently. She was barly breathing. Her arms were burned. Her legs were bured aswell. She spoke "rock!" Her eyes weren't giving any tears. She is in a terrible condition. The guard walked up the stairs and closed the door. Gavin closed the cell door. And he fell to his knee's and started crying.

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"Well, at least we now have a common enemy" Rock shrugged

 

He turned to Sarah "I won't let them do anything to you" He hugged her

 

He then turned to Charcoal "We've got a plan to get out here. Help is on it's way soon, and the more ponies that help out, the better. Are you with us?"

 

 

I turn to rock. "I'm in. Though we might need to make a detour on the way out. I've got something that could be of use. So why is it they are trying to kill you? Is it because you want to leave, do you have information that francis doesn't want out, or does he just not like you?

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I turn to rock. "I'm in. Though we might need to make a detour on the way out. I've got something that could be of use. So why is it they are trying to kill you? Is it because you want to leave, do you have information that francis doesn't want out, or does he just not like you?

"From what I gathered, Francis might of had a thing for Sarah. And since we're both together, I guess that really put him on edge"

 

Suddenly, Gavin came downstairs VVV

 

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2 Hours Later

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All three ponies heard the door open then close.

Gavin came down the stairs Gavin's facial expression said it all.

 

"I..I'm sorry Rock.." Gavin said.

Gavin opened the cell. He looked sad. He grabbed Sarah and took her out of the cell.

"Hey let go!!" Sarah said.

 

"Jason's asked to see Sarah." Gavin said.

"He's going to tourcher you for being pregnant." I-I..." Gavin tried to speak, but nothing came out. He took Sarah upstairs.

 

After some time they could hear Sarah screaming. They could hear her balling.

"Please stop!!" She screamed you could hear the crying in her voice.

"Pleeeease!!!" She cried.

"Then tell us what you know." Jason Lark said.

"Noooo!" She cried.

"Double the voltige Gavin." Jason Lark.

"Enough is enough Sir!" Gavin said.

"Do it now!" Jason Lark screamed.

"Ahhhhhh!!" Sarah screamed.

 

This went on for an hour.

Gavin finally brought Sarah back down with a Guard. Gavin laid Sarah down gently. She was barly breathing. Her arms were burned. Her legs were bured aswell. She spoke "rock!" Her eyes weren't giving any tears. She is in a terrible condition. The guard walked up the stairs and closed the door. Gavin closed the cell door. And he fell to his knee's and started crying.

"You're alive" He exclaimed "I'm so glad..."

 

He looked at the burn wounds "I-I hope the baby is okay"

 

He quickly laid Sarah's head in his lap.

Rock turned to Charcoal "There's no going back on this. When help comes, we're going to get what we need. Get out. And never come back until this problem has sorted itself out"


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Gavin left in disbelief for what he's done.

 

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[ Time: 9:58 ]

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Everypony was quiet. And something broke the silence. "Psst." They heard from the window. There was a dark cloaked pony by the window.

"Sugar cube, what's going on?" AppleJack said.

"Is everypony alright?" She whispered.

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"From what I gathered, Francis might of had a thing for Sarah. And since we're both together, I guess that really put him on edge"

 

Suddenly, Gavin came downstairs VVV

 

"You're alive" He exclaimed "I'm so glad..."

 

He looked at the burn wounds "I-I hope the baby is okay"

 

He quickly laid Sarah's head in his lap.

Rock turned to Charcoal "There's no going back on this. When help comes, we're going to get what we need. Get out. And never come back until this problem has sorted itself out"

 

 

"You two can go on. The stuff I need to get might attract unwanted attention." I look towards sarah and cringe. "And it doesn't look like the only kind of attention she is going to need is medical attention. Plus, I may know somepony that could be very helpful."

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"You two can go on. The stuff I need to get might attract unwanted attention." I look towards sarah and cringe. "And it doesn't look like the only kind of attention she is going to need is medical attention. Plus, I may know somepony that could be very helpful."

"Okay, we'll try to wait up for you outside the fort" Rock looked back at Sarah "I know how to treat burns, but any medical help you can spare will be good"

 

*After time skip*

 

"Applejack" rock whispered "its a damn long story, I'll tell you on the way. But first we need to get out of here. Sarah is wounded, and I need to get my cousin from my house"


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"Okay just wait a second." Applejack ran off.

AppleJack came back after a time period

"Okay. So Scootaloo got your cousin she's now out by the outskirts with her. She'll be waiting for us."

AppleJack put a bomb on the window. "Put Sarah on your back Rock." She said. Then BOOM the wall was gone. The alarm went off.

AppleJack ran inside and went over and unlocked her cell. "Let's go!" She yelled.

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"Okey dokey" Rock lifted Sarah onto his back, they climbed out of the jail cell "Lead the way"

 

Careful not to run too fast, Rock made sure Sarah was comfortable.

Meanwhile, he noticed that Charcoal ran off in the opposite direction, assumingly to grab his stuff.


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*Time skip to after she grabbed her stuff and found caprisha and went outside the gate*

"Alright lets see, got a few sets of armor, my tools, a few differnet kinds of weapons, a few gems to enchant with... yep, I think that's everything."

 

"So Charcoal can you, oh I don't know. Explain what the buck is going on here!!!

 

"Sorry, I'm not entirely sure myself. I was just kind of roped into this. But when the others get here they should be able to explain it to you. Oh look here they come now."

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When Rock climbed out and Charcoal.

They noticed there was 8 ponies.

"I brought some friends." AppleJack said.

 

They saw Fluttershy, Sweetie Belle, AppleJack, Big Mac, Spike, AppleBloom, RainbowDash, and Pinkie Pie.

 

"Let's do this!!" Rainbow Dash said.

"I-I-I-I'm not sure." FlutterShy said.

"Eyeup!" Big Mac agreed with Rainbow.

 

When Charcoal ran in a differet direction. Sweetie Belle ran after her to help her.

 

Pinkie Pie smiled. "This is going to be fun!!" She said.

"Let's go!!!" AppleJack took off towards the Northern Gate.


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When Rock climbed out and Charcoal.

They noticed there was 8 ponies.

"I brought some friends." AppleJack said.

 

They saw Fluttershy, Sweetie Belle, AppleJack, Big Mac, Spike, AppleBloom, RainbowDash, and Pinkie Pie.

 

"Let's do this!!" Rainbow Dash said.

"I-I-I-I'm not sure." FlutterShy said.

"Eyeup!" Big Mac agreed with Rainbow.

 

When Charcoal ran in a differet direction. Sweetie Belle ran after her to help her.

 

Pinkie Pie smiled. "This is going to be fun!!" She said.

"Let's go!!!" AppleJack took off towards the Northern Gate.

"They look awfully familiar" Rock said, he saw his cousin, a little brown filly, was amongst them "Okay, this is great! We should be able to get out after all. We just got to wait for Charcoal"

 

*Time skip to after she grabbed her stuff and found caprisha and went outside the gate*

"Alright lets see, got a few sets of armor, my tools, a few differnet kinds of weapons, a few gems to enchant with... yep, I think that's everything."

 

"So Charcoal can you, oh I don't know. Explain what the buck is going on here!!!

 

"Sorry, I'm not entirely sure myself. I was just kind of roped into this. But when the others get here they should be able to explain it to you. Oh look here they come now."

Rock saw the two ponies run towards his group "The more the merrier" He smiled "Let go!"


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The huge group of ponies took off into the mist.

It wasn't long till Guards and Francis and his small group of friends was chasing them. They shot their guns but missed and the group finally didn't know where they went.

 

They finally stopped running. And AppleJack turned around and looked at the group. "What now rock?" She said out of breath.


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Rock closed his eyes and went into deep thought.

 

"Hey cousin, I got this for you"

 

Rock took the saddlebag from Dandelion. He opened it and pulled the letter out.

 

"Apparently, this letter mentions something about a storm" he said "I'm clueless as to what it could mean, but I'm assuming that something bad is going to happen"

 

He puts the letter away.

"What we have to do now is set up camp I guess. Near a river. That way we can just rest, discuss all this crap that has happened lately and go from there"


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"There's a lake that I know of, but it's far away." AppleJack said.

"Let's get going." Rainbow Dash added.

"Fun!" Pinkie pie said smiling.

 

Pinkie pie noticed Sarah on Rocks back. "Awh!" She said.

 

As they started walking AppleJack looked at Rock. And sighed.

"We do not know what the Storm is either. We can only assume on our end." AppleJack said.

 

"Even if we knew anything about it, Francis would of had our head if we spoke." Rainbow Dash added to the conversation while hovering overhead.

 

"Scootaloo didn't know anything about the Storm it was a rumor to get her killed." AppleJack said.

"But they didn't kill the Amazing Scootaloo!" Scootaloo said.

Apple Bloom laughed at that comment.

 

"I wish I knew what it was." Fluttershy said quietly.

"I'm scared for the remaining woodland friends." Fluttershy added.


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"We haven't escaped Francis yet, I doubt he would let us go so easily" Rock said "We ought to be careful of any tricks he might pull"

 

Rock looked around him and noticed the rather large male:female ratio. It slightly discomforted him.

'Being raised in a male dominated area does not help you be comfortable around mares' Rock thought to himself


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AppleJack nodded in agreement. "I know it won't be the last of him. And I don't expect him not too be a threat." AppleJack said.

 

"That's why we had an idea to have a watch through out the night. Fillies could not be on watch however." RainbowDash said.

 

As they continued walking Fluttershy noticed the pony on Rock Thatcher's back.

"W-w-who is that?" Fluttershy said quietly.

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"This is Sarah" Rock answered "She's been through some tough torture. Francis electrocuted her despite the fact she's pregnant!"

Rock looked back at Sarah

"I'm looking after her till she gets better"

 

"Is she your girlfriend?" Dandelion asked

 

Rock blushed "Yes..."


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AppleJack gave Rock a concerning look.

"She is your girlfriend, yet she's pregnant??" AppleJack said.

"Who's child is she expecting??" Applejack added.

 

"We'll congratulations!" Fluttershy said with a Sqeak.

 

"Eyeup!" Big Mac agreed with a smile.

"We'll she's cute!" Sweetie Belle said.

"She is!" AppleBloom stated.


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"Oh, you know... my child" Rock laughed nervously "We kinda did it in prison. Twice"

He noticed the cutie mark crusaders giving him weird looks.

"Uhh..."

 

'Great job being awkward doctor' He thought to himself 'Celestia knows how you manage to pull mares in with that attitude'


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"I should probley introduce myself. My name is Charcoal Embers, I am, or was i guess the best builder of anything in town. That is why I have so many weapons and lots of armor with me right now. So if anyone needs any be my guest. And this is my best friend caprisha." I point to the bright orange unicorn.

 

"Yeah hey everyone."

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AppleJack gave him a smile. "We'll I'm happy fer' ya!"

 

"Awh, that is so cute!!" Pinkie Pie said. She started to jump around the group saying. "They made love!" "They made love!!" Rapidly.

 

AppleJack replied. "Uh.. Pinkie Pie, please don't do that."

"Yeah, it's not very nice!" Rainbow Dash said.

"Eyeup!" Big Mac agreed.

 

"We'll uh.. I don't know what that is.." AppleBloom said stumped.

"Oh! It's whe-" Scootaloo started.

"No..no..no!" AppleJack interrupted.

"You fillies don't need to know about that till you're older." Fluttershy said.

"They'd enjoy it too much anyways." Rainbow Dash said.

Big Mac knocked into her and said "Nope."

 

RainbowDash smiled. "What??" She said with a nervous smile.

 

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"Howdy! I'm AppleJack!" AppleJack introduced.

"This is Big Mac." AppleJack said "Eyeup" Big Mac agreed.

"This is Pinkie Pie, RainbowDash, and Fluttershy"

 

"H-h-hi!" Fluttershy said quietly.

"This is the Cutie Mark Crusader's. Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Apple Bloom!" AppleJack continued.

"And I'm Spike! I'm a dragon." Spike said.

"I'm the number one assistant fo-" spike paused.

"Used to be.." He said sulkingly.

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AppleJack gave him a smile. "We'll I'm happy fer' ya!"

 

"Awh, that is so cute!!" Pinkie Pie said. She started to jump around the group saying. "They made love!" "They made love!!" Rapidly.

 

AppleJack replied. "Uh.. Pinkie Pie, please don't do that."

"Yeah, it's not very nice!" Rainbow Dash said.

"Eyeup!" Big Mac agreed.

 

"We'll uh.. I don't know what that is.." AppleBloom said stumped.

"Oh! It's whe-" Scootaloo started.

"No..no..no!" AppleJack interrupted.

"You fillies don't need to know about that till you're older." Fluttershy said.

"They'd enjoy it too much anyways." Rainbow Dash said.

Big Mac knocked into her and said "Nope."

 

RainbowDash smiled. "What??" She said with a nervous smile.

 

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"Howdy! I'm AppleJack!" AppleJack introduced.

"This is Big Mac." AppleJack said "Eyeup" Big Mac agreed.

"This is Pinkie Pie, RainbowDash, and Fluttershy"

 

"H-h-hi!" Fluttershy said quietly.

"This is the Cutie Mark Crusader's. Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Apple Bloom!" AppleJack continued.

"And I'm Spike! I'm a dragon." Spike said.

"I'm the number one assistant fo-" spike paused.

"Used to be.." He said sulkingly.

 

 

"Well it seems we're going to be getting to knwo eachother very well so names are a good place to start. So what's the game plan? I can't carry these weapons and armor forever you know, it gets heavy after a while. And I don't feel like getting caught yet either." 

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