Another OC, Shimmer.

[MiniWing22 9]

This is Shimmer. She's a unicorn pony who can make magic but when she uses it in only messes things up, in other words her magic does the opposite of what it is supposed to do. She always practices fixing her magic but it never works well, it can only do things that are dangerous and she at times is unable to control her magic, it will do things on it's own. If I write the story about her I'll make a part where she's banished from Ponyville and Canterlot due to an unfortunate accident caused by her magic. When banished she is banished to the Everfree Forest, and searches for Zecora to help her in any way, during this time an enemy comes to rule Equestria and enslave the ponies who live in it, and she finds that her magic is the only one unique enough to defeat this enemy.  I plan for her to gain a cutie mark after defeating the enemy but it's kind of a rushed design, I'd like to re-do it.

Edited August 9, 2013 by MiniWing22

[~Rule 63~ Lyeco 527]

Add sunset, and that would be a different story.

Plus your OC looks like a guy and where the heck is the cutie mark anyway?

My rating is 6.5/10

[MelancholicMemory 2,027]

I think the backstory needs some work, and you might want to improve the mane design, but overall very nice. I like the color scheme, in particular. As for the art, the neck and horn are a bit long, and the tail is connected in an odd way, but that can easily be fixed. Overall, great work.