Equestrian Valour (Silverwisp's Equestrian army project, 2 pages done)

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Those of you, who have at some point frequented my art thread, know that I'm a sucker for drawing ponies in armour and that I love rambling and theorizing about Equestrian history. You might also know that I got a complicated relationship with Equestria Divided: I love the art and the idea of exploring the concept of an Equestrian Army, but I do feel it could do with a lot less GRIMDARK.

 

So I decided to make my own army project, set in a pre-Discord Equestria and I finally got the first page done:

 

I really want your input on this one, especially concerning layout and grammar/spelling (English isn't my first language). So please leave a comment.

 

If I got you interested and you'd like to contribute, you can click here for the project thread.

Edited August 12, 2013 by Silverwisp the Bard

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

And that's another page done. Whohoo.

If anyone could alert me to the presence of any typos/grammatical errors, I'd be most grateful.