Pony OC advice

[Guusagi 18]

 

 

 

 

I decided to redo my pony OC recently, it was tough for me to find hair and a good color scheme that i'd like but... she was originally a pegasus but her talent didn't have any need of flight, since she needs to be able to write or books, and in general it feels more fitting for her talent to be an earth pony or a unicorn, but I went with earth pony in the end, since she can easily use a type writer and not necessarily use a pen with unicorn powers.

 
I think of calling her Plume Tea or Glimmer Pen, or mixing any of those 4 words.

She is a pony who loves to read and write stories, by personality she is introverted, and hates being surrounded by company when she is at work or brainstorming for ideas. Plume/Glimmer/Pen/Tea (lmao), lives in Trottinham. She tends to venture outside a lot to get inspiration though, and has a good selection of friends (which for now are just anon background ponies, if I start a roleplay with her then she'll get 'real' friends) A big flaw of hers would be that she is very closed-minded about other ponies she didn't befriend or got to know any better, and usually is reluctant with strangers talking to her or being part of big events, though not so much as to actually being mean and emo (no offense to emos and the like )

 

If anyone can give any advice or fix something that might not make sense, tell if the pony is interesting or boring and what not... it would be awesome

Edited August 23, 2013 by TwilieSparklz

[Scootalove 10,689]

Your OC so far has a good design, good color scheme, and a pretty good backstory. So, I don't think that you need to make any improvements just yet.

[Adente 1,000]

Well, the only thing I can add is that I like Plume Pen as a name, but that might just be because I'm a fan of alliteration. But yeah, I like the design, the backstory isn't angsty or overly tragic, (I have a big issue with those sorts of backstories) and she sounds like a compelling character with strengths and flaws, which many people don't give their characters. Good job!