FREEDOM! (lyrics)

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I just finished writing this (the story behind this will be below), it is titled Freedom!

 

LYRICS:

 

It was a cold day when,

you answered the call and,

your fate led you to,

fight in the war.

 

You were courageous and brave,

you fought to the very end

and stood your ground.

you fought for what you believed in,

and,

you fought for our freedom,

(for our freedom!)

 

Despite all your training and convictions,

nothing could have prepared you for,

what happened to you,

for what you saw,

before your eyes!

 

You were courageous and brave,

you fought to the very end

and stood your ground.

you fought for what you believed in,

and,

you fought for our freedom,

(for our freedom!)

 

you did all you could but,

your friends and brothers in arms,

all died in front of you.

And now that the war is over,

you don't know what to do.

 

You were courageous and brave,

you fought to the very end

and stood your ground.

you fought for what you believed in,

and,

you fought for our freedom,

(for our freedom!)

 

Injured and scarred,

you came home to Equestria,

Ponies came from far and wide to,

thank you for,

your service to Celestia.

And that's when I saw you,

and you saw me.

 

You were courageous and brave,

you fought to the very end

and stood your ground.

you fought for what you believed in,

and,

you fought for our freedom,

(for our freedom!)

 

I saw past the scars

and past your tough exterior

I saw your kind and warm heart,

and that's when,

when I fell for you,

and your new life was about to start.

 

You were courageous and brave,

you fought to the very end

and stood your ground.

you fought for what you believed in,

and,

you fought for our freedom,

(for our freedom!)

 

You confessed your undying love and,

told me, I was more beautiful than the stars,

in the night sky above,

and I love you!

 

You fought for our freedom

and you defended the kingdom.

your friends all died, but you survived

and you came home

you came home to me,

and I love you!

 

You were courageous and brave,

you fought to the very end

and stood your ground.

you fought for what you believed in,

and,

you fought for our freedom,

(for our freedom!)

 

Story:

 

The story behind this is quite simple, in a roleplay with a close friend of mine, he was a medic in the Royal Equestrian Army, he had fought in a war, and saw all of his friends die in front of him, he had came home, and I had seen him try to kill himself, so I dragged him to the hospital, that is where he met Nurse Redheart and they fell in love with each other.

 

Setting:

 

The setting/style is pretty much the same as my other two songs, slow and sad.

Oh, and I would love your opinion on it, is it good, bad, what? Oh and if some ponies could maybe help with writing/recording the music to it and singing it, that would be awesome!