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When twisted saw the other pony with the bleeding eye he felt how his memories came back. Memories of what he saw and also did. He felt something warm creeping up his legs and into his head. WHY HAVE YOU NOT KILLED THEM YET? DO IT ! POKE OUT HIS OTHER EYE! Twisted groaned and fought against the horrible thoughts. Even though they felt so right. Even though they were a serious option. I mean, killing them would infact be a pretty reasonable option. He shook his head to clear it of some of the thoughts. But why fight it? You can feel that it is the right decision can you not? Twisted stumbled away from the two ponys. He heard one of them mumbling something. It sounded, like it came from far away. He fell into a hole. And asleep.

[ Im gonna go offline now, since it is 1:30 am over here and i am tired. Goodnight everyone :D ]

EDIT: [ This would be the second time i kill a RP by saying, that im gonna go to sleep. Im back.]

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Twisted felt his head. No. He felt his hoof on his head. Hm. When he touched his head with his hoof, did he feel his head, his hoof or both? Hmmm. Interesting question. He felt his head pulsing. Or was it his hoof? No, it was his head, because he still felt the pulsing after he removed his hoof from his head. So i DID feel my head not my hoof! Or did i? Twisted was confused by this debate over if his hoof felt his head, his head felt his hoof or the head felt itself and the hoof felt itself. He wanted to shake his head to clear his head, but when he tried to do so he collided with something hard and dirty. His head hurt even more now. Twisted opened his eyes and looked at a bug. If he or the bug were more confused by this meeting is still being debated, however does everyone agree, that both were pretty shocked at the exploration of a new species. Some say, that that bug was really intelligent and therefore knew, how to respond to situations like that.The bug looked at Twisted with a lot of curiosity and interest. Twisted squashed the bug. He now saw, where he was. In a dirt hole next to the path he and Blueberry had taken before. He flew out of the hole and saw Blueberry look at him . "What happened?" He asked, unsure of what had just happpened, who that bug had been and more importantly: how and why he had gotten into that hole in the first place.

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I Think you fell into a hole!

"Why thank you i got that far. I have no idea why though" Twisted replied and looked at the hole, searching for clues why he would have wanted to get in there.

 

You are heavier than you look....

"Thanks for the compliment and lift. But i have wings of my own. You see." Twisted opened his wings as if to show, that he did infact have wings and the only reason he had stayed in the hole was, that he wanted to find out why he had gotten in there in the first place.

"Aright. So what do we do now?"

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( Let me guess. Poison joke?)

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I ThINk WE SHoUld - GAAAH!

Twisted jumped back a couple of steps . What in the hell was going on with her voice? It had always been a bit scratchy, but that wasnt bad, compared to what was going on now.

 

 

WHAt In EqUEsTRiA HAppEned TO mY VOice?!

Appearantly did she not know what was going on aswell. Twisted looked at her, his head at an angle. " Have you been eating any poison joke rescently? Blue flowers?"

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Two apples.

 

Two apples was all Blue could find after the two ponies sent him to get food. Some more would be nice, or maybe a better fruit too; pineapples are nice, but they probably don't even grow here.

 

Anyway, Blue thought it would probably be of his best interest to head back to the other ponies with the two apples. They could share the apples; I believe one of the ponies said they were good with knifes.

 

While Blue started to head back, he realized a very crucial detail. He had no idea where he was. The other ponies were nowhere to be seen, and it looked like it was getting dark soon.

 

It's probably just the trees; it can't be almost dark already. Maybe I should try calling for them? But what were there names again? Uh, maybe this will work.

 

"Hello?!"

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Eddie Silver woke up inside of the plane stuck between the seats as during the crash he experienced a few hard bumps breaking his nose, injuring both of his wings and getting a minor concusion, when he woke up his mouth was dry and while he was passed out his left eye was half open and thus feeling a sharp pain in it "..ugh...he-...wha...." he felt weak and spent as he was stuck in the seats.

 

He managed to open his eyes fully and be aware of his surroundings, he also managed to crawl out of those seats and eventually slowly crawling out of the wreckege as he fell from it to the ground on his injured wing "...aaaarrgh!!.."  Eddie crawled to the nearest to tree as he leaned his back against it, he didnt remember all of this happen, mostly due to him sleeping through the whole flight.

Eddie could feel the cold pulsating pain in his nose as he tasted his own blood as it was bleeding while he was passed out, less than half his face was covered in blood "....the heck...the heck happened...OBVIO- *cough cough....COUGH*...uuugh...where am i....?"

 

(now i always have problems starting something, so i hope this is good enough of a start for my OC, dont judge)

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(Eddie, it's okay. Your entrance was pretty well written and it's a very good way for your OC to enter the RP  :D)

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(well thank you for the compliment :) i sure hope you arent lying)

 

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Eddie heard somepony yell, he slowly/weakly turned side to side as he didnt notice anypony, he figured he hit his head hard during the crash and was hearing things.

As Eddie was laying on the ground and his back against the tree, he tried to get up to hopefully find nearest civilization and return to Manehattan if possible, getting straight up proved to be a challange for Eddie, so he tried to roll over and push up off the ground and on his hooves "...water...need it...hope the...hope THE PILOT...! THE PILOT DIED FIRST!"

he got up on his hooves barely, but his hooves was still wably and felt that he wouldnt stand up straight for long, so he leaned against the tree again to hopefully regain strenght.

"guilty...guilty will different from me...from the killed it HA too late" at this point Eddie couldnt make sence of his words and his concusion was not helping at all.

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Twisted stood there in trance. It was as though his entire body had just frozen solid. Or moving in slow motion. Or frozen in slow motion. He didnt exactly know yet, but he didnt pay attention to it. He just concentrated on the feeling of.... what? What kind of feeling was it? Like isolation, but in a good way. Maybe then the feeling stopped. He looked around. And couldnt see. It had gone dark. When has it gone dark? What? I know it was bright just a bit of time ago. He didnt remember standing here that long. He had just concentrated on that slighty darker spot on that tree on the tree opposite of him while Mrs axe had been eating all the poison joke. He went closer to the dark spot, trying to figure out what it was. It looked and smelled surprisingly like..... BLOOD! Adrenaline rushed through his veins. His mind went blank, only to be bombarded with pressure in the next second. SCREEEEEEEEEECHHHH went his mind, the only thoughts he had were a slurry mix of pain and pressure in his head, in an almost dancing rythm of insanity. He felt something warm running down the sides of his face, he shot out his tongue to see what it was and was greeted with the metallic taste of blood. His mind felt like it had thunderstorms riddled with artillery fire raining down onto his brain. He looked up and saw a constant drip of blood coming down. The next thing he new he was doing was lying underneath said drip with his mouth open, trying to catch as much as possible, every little drip being greeted by another shockwave in his head. He wanted it to stop but at the same time couldnt. He was just lying there, drinking the blood dripping from what he assumed was another corpse in the tree. And he couldnt stop.

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To his surprise, a pony actually did turn up: Blueberry, that pony he saw earlier when he was first sent to find food. 

 

"Uh, yeah, I think so," he said. "I got some apples."

 

Blue Moon showed her the apples he found. He wondered where everyone else was, but he did notice a pony leaning against a tree.

 

"Uh, is he okay?," he asked Blueberry, but his question was drowned out by her yelling over to him.

 

Guess I'll find out one way or another.

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Twisteds mind was all over the place. He wanted to stop having the drip of blood in his face, but at the same time could he not stop since every drop that fell in his mouth imploded in his brain, making it impossible for him to even move. He noticed a little bit of movement in the bushes. His eyes tried to follow that movement and got stuck on mrs axe looking at him in horror. He couldnt say anything. He couldnt move. He was paralyzed by the shockwaves travelling through his brain at the speed with the force of a jet. He just looked at her, his eyes filled with sheer pain.

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Eddie was still weak and he felt his mouth dry as sand, he couldnt imagine how to get anywhere with his condition, he experienced this before, Eddie knew he wouldnt be able to fall sleep if he wanted to right now, he would lie on the ground and meet his end "...just one guy...hundreds of those one guys AAAGH!" he started breathing heavily "AAAAAAAAAH!! YEEEEE....! HEEEEELP!!" Eddie started screaming out of desperation "WHO MADE THIS DAMN PLANE I HOPE THEY'RE FAMILY BURNS ALIVE IN A FUrna-...!!*cough cough*" from the screaming, Eddie lost his voice a little.

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"Yeah, that would work" Blue Moon said; giving the apples to Blueberry. Yeah, that's probably her name. However, she seemed to be in some sort of trance; she was staring off into a nearby bush. He followed her gaze, and could hear a small gurgling sound from the bush.

 

"Um, what's that noise?" he said with a gulp.

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Soon after Blueberry replied, she fell over. This shocked Blue quite a bit.

 

"Um, are you alright." No response. Well, I guess I should go check out Twisted, and see what all the fuss is about.

 

He looked down at Blueberry, and nudged her with his hoof, but was still met with no response.

 

Well, I shouldn't leave her out here; Twisted might be dangerous.

 

With that thought, he dragged Blueberry over to a nearby bush to hide her.

 

Hopefully this will hide her.

 

After moving Blueberry, he started to slowly walk over to Twisted.

 

"Um, what are you doing?" he called out.

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